Dawn at Silver Lake
5/7/5 poem for contest15 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is beautifully expressed in thoughts, words, and feelings, Mystery Poet. Good job with the syllable count per line. The image is perfect and so beautiful. Your words create great imagery even if a picture had not been added.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Your contest entry is beautifully expressed in thoughts, words, and feelings, Mystery Poet. Good job with the syllable count per line. The image is perfect and so beautiful. Your words create great imagery even if a picture had not been added.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much, Jan :) Have a wonderful weekend, my friend
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely and elegant--alliteration BR BL BR--clever and fresh twist on usual cloud in sky imagery--floating on water! Fine work in a 5-7-5. Good luck. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Lovely and elegant--alliteration BR BL BR--clever and fresh twist on usual cloud in sky imagery--floating on water! Fine work in a 5-7-5. Good luck. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Liz.
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Comment from equestrik
What a beautiful combination this is with both your well chosen photograph and your lovely haiku. It makes mme want to be there-especially now that it has turned very cold here.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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What a beautiful combination this is with both your well chosen photograph and your lovely haiku. It makes mme want to be there-especially now that it has turned very cold here.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
This is a nice poem, enhanced greatly by the very beautiful picture of the lake.
From the title alone, I thought this might be a gun fight poem. That's probably because I grew up on westerns on TV :)
The haiku format works very well and the syllable count is correct.
Nice entry to the contest.
Best of luck.
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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This is a nice poem, enhanced greatly by the very beautiful picture of the lake.
From the title alone, I thought this might be a gun fight poem. That's probably because I grew up on westerns on TV :)
The haiku format works very well and the syllable count is correct.
Nice entry to the contest.
Best of luck.
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written 5-7-5 you have penned about dawn at Silver Lake. You used very good descriptive words and beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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This is a very beautiful and very well written 5-7-5 you have penned about dawn at Silver Lake. You used very good descriptive words and beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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