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Blue Moon

Loop Poetry

36 total reviews 
Comment from l.raven
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HI Sally, nicely written loop poem my sweet friend....
there is just something about the moon shinning down
on the water...it makes even the darkest night...
light up the world...
I love your poem sweet girl...and love this picture...
couldn't be more perfect...very nicely written you...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review. This was my first loop. These are difficult especially with a rhyming scheme. I enjoyed the challenge though. Thanks for the stellar review, my sweet. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your day,
    Sal XOs.......
reply by l.raven on 04-Nov-2020
    you did a wonderful job you...and I just love the moon...so many moods...always welcome ...have a wonderful evening...love you...xxoo
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
    Love you, too, sweet friend!!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Love the gentle vision you've presented here, my lady!! ;) Great loop offering (they are definitely the kind of poem that challenges me the most... ;) ;) A bit far behind as spent the last 3+ days getting this place fixed up for selling - photographer came yesterday evening - so it'll be on the market by the weekend... hooray! (I think!) ... ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review. I found the rhyming loop difficult. My first loop wasn't a rhyming scheme and seemed to flow better. I prefer that style. There's already enough to think about with a loop. You know what I mean? This was like playing an accordion while tap dancing. A thought for another poem in an of itself.
    Sending you my best today as always. (I just sent up a prayer for your house to sell.)
    Sal XOs.....
Comment from Cindy Warren
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We have a blue moon this month, don't we? On Halloween, I think. I'm sure it will be beautiful, like a sapphire on a string of pearls. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments!
    Sal XOs....
Comment from Julie Sandy
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Hi Sally loved your loop poem very clever
I love the moon and all things space.
I really enjoyed the picture and the lovely music very relaxing.

Good luck in the competition

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    Dear Julie, thank you for the beautiful review and the starshine. I am blessed. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your day,
    Sally XOs....
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a lovely loop poem about the large moon. Your words are very poetic and descriptive. The create a lovely words picture of what you are describing. The picture you chose to illustrate the poem is lovely as well.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review and compliments, dear Beth!
    Sal XOs.....
Comment from Ronni
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Hello dear Sally,
Truly love your enticing Blue Moon Loop Poem style shared here!
Gives the sensation of an opening stage play in which the ever
mystical, magical Blue Moon sweeps one into its inevitable spell!
Imagery so vivid swoops the senses in enchanted delight and
lingering portents and potentials far beyond the dream phase.
Most profound and illustrious read and presentation.
Very best luck in contest dear!
Slowly edging back, this was a most inspiring and delight to read!
Take care, God Bless...
Love,blessings always, Ronni

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the beautiful review and generous six star rating, Irani. It is so appreciated and just blesses me so. It is so wonderful to see you and just made me tear up seeing your name.

    Sending my best today and blessings always,
    Sal XOs...xo....
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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I really enjoy listening to good music when writing your review. Your poem is pure loveliness and no doubt was inspired by the beautiful song.So well done!

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much for the lovely review! Sal XOs....
Comment from Joan E.
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I enjoyed your choice of the Loop Poem and the magical picture. Your "drapes" and "strings of pearls" metaphors were very effective. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind compliments! Sal XOs.....
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Interesting loop poem about the blue moon. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this form and good luck in the contest. The moon is always a good subject for writing. Bill

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind comments for my poem. Sal xo
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This is the second entry for this contest I have. The first was very good and yours is very good also. This is going to be a hard contest. I really liked reading your poem. I wish you the best of luck,

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Barbara. Sal XOs.....