If my ambitions...
A poem17 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This poem flows so smoothly it is easy for (at least this) reader to neglect the deeper notes. I read it through twice, and I'm not sure I reached far enough into the tale yet - but don't worry, I will continue studying it.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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This poem flows so smoothly it is easy for (at least this) reader to neglect the deeper notes. I read it through twice, and I'm not sure I reached far enough into the tale yet - but don't worry, I will continue studying it.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Thanks Katherine, for these fantastic comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I try to teach my first graders that telling the truth is extremely important because if you lose a person's trust you will probably never gain it back. They struggle with that concept, as some adults to. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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I try to teach my first graders that telling the truth is extremely important because if you lose a person's trust you will probably never gain it back. They struggle with that concept, as some adults to. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thanks Barbara, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janetsue
Wish I had a six for this, Roy. I really enjoyed reading it. Currently, I am reading an APOLOGETICS Bible and gaining a new exposure to meanings of many Scriptures. It always amazes me that no matter how many times we have read the Blessed Book, something new is always revealed and appreciated. Smiles and blessings, Janet
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Wish I had a six for this, Roy. I really enjoyed reading it. Currently, I am reading an APOLOGETICS Bible and gaining a new exposure to meanings of many Scriptures. It always amazes me that no matter how many times we have read the Blessed Book, something new is always revealed and appreciated. Smiles and blessings, Janet
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much Janet, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Teri7
Very good poem you have penned Roy. Very good descriptive words and very interesting imagery from the art work you chose.
Please check this out:
who've sold you souls to evil's kin.
did you mean (your) souls to evil's kin
Thank you for sharing. Great job. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Very good poem you have penned Roy. Very good descriptive words and very interesting imagery from the art work you chose.
Please check this out:
who've sold you souls to evil's kin.
did you mean (your) souls to evil's kin
Thank you for sharing. Great job. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much Teri, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from judiverse
This is beautifully worded. It's great that you express you admiration for those who wrote of God's truth. God seeks out those who have wit and worth and will tell the truth. Excellent thoughts about how important honesty is. In second stanza, I think you mean your souls. judi
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This is beautifully worded. It's great that you express you admiration for those who wrote of God's truth. God seeks out those who have wit and worth and will tell the truth. Excellent thoughts about how important honesty is. In second stanza, I think you mean your souls. judi
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much Judy for these excellent comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
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You're welcome. Enjoy your weekend. judi
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You too, I?m retired, every day?s a Saturday heh heh.
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You notice when you're retired how people always come to you with things they want you to do? You're on the volunteer list! judi
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That?s true heh heh
Comment from Sally Law
I see you're telling message here of our in times, Tara royal. Many have left what is truth and written down clearly in the word. This is saddening to me that many have departed from the truth, but the Bible does say in the end times this will be the case. I have better hope for those who work closely with the Lord. Jesus said, take care of that you are not deceived. He would not have said that if we weren't easily deceived. As sheep we must follow Him closely and attend His word.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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I see you're telling message here of our in times, Tara royal. Many have left what is truth and written down clearly in the word. This is saddening to me that many have departed from the truth, but the Bible does say in the end times this will be the case. I have better hope for those who work closely with the Lord. Jesus said, take care of that you are not deceived. He would not have said that if we weren't easily deceived. As sheep we must follow Him closely and attend His word.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thanks Sally, for these fantastic comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about our ambitions and mottos are important to be in lined with what Jesus described himself as the way, the truth, and the life and we can follow in His example.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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A very well-written poem about our ambitions and mottos are important to be in lined with what Jesus described himself as the way, the truth, and the life and we can follow in His example.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thanks Sandra, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from BethShelby
Truth is personification of Christ. He shared the way of salvation with men of old who wrote at God inspired them. He looks for those today to write words of inspiration.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Truth is personification of Christ. He shared the way of salvation with men of old who wrote at God inspired them. He looks for those today to write words of inspiration.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thanks Beth, for these super comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Quite the tongue twister--sold word's sword--clever sequel--severed eternal cord. Whimsical ocean/pearl association! Cheers. LIZ (sold you souls s/b your)
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Quite the tongue twister--sold word's sword--clever sequel--severed eternal cord. Whimsical ocean/pearl association! Cheers. LIZ (sold you souls s/b your)
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thanks Liz, for these super comments, and review, Blessings Roy
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This has a slightly different tone from your other poems. The use of the word 'avast' had me thinking of pirates, or something from the 18th or early 19th centuries. Favorite lines:
The eyes of God roam round the world,
to find some men of wit and worth.
Who love the truth and long to print,
the wisdom found dipped in faith's ink.
Nice alliteration with 'wit' and 'worth' and suggested metaphor of faith being like ink and wisdom like a pen.
Only suggestion: change you souls to evil's kin
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your souls to evil's kin
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This has a slightly different tone from your other poems. The use of the word 'avast' had me thinking of pirates, or something from the 18th or early 19th centuries. Favorite lines:
The eyes of God roam round the world,
to find some men of wit and worth.
Who love the truth and long to print,
the wisdom found dipped in faith's ink.
Nice alliteration with 'wit' and 'worth' and suggested metaphor of faith being like ink and wisdom like a pen.
Only suggestion: change you souls to evil's kin
to
your souls to evil's kin
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much Crystie, for these fantastic comments, and a beautiful review, Blessings Roy
