Sensual Refrain
A song that resonates through our very being...21 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about lovers who are coming together and find a sensual attraction between them that leads to passionate love in the Symphony of desire.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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A very well-written poem about lovers who are coming together and find a sensual attraction between them that leads to passionate love in the Symphony of desire.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Sandra! Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Mark D. R.
you chose an excellent artwork to accompany your contest entry
do like your connection between passion and pleasure and orchestrates and symphony - very expressive phrases
good luck in the voting
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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you chose an excellent artwork to accompany your contest entry
do like your connection between passion and pleasure and orchestrates and symphony - very expressive phrases
good luck in the voting
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Mark! Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is Beautifully written poem . I like your descriptive wording.Hushed sighs chase passions height as pleasure orchestrates it's lush symphony of desire. The artwork is beautiful as well and works nicely with Your words. Well
Done.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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This is Beautifully written poem . I like your descriptive wording.Hushed sighs chase passions height as pleasure orchestrates it's lush symphony of desire. The artwork is beautiful as well and works nicely with Your words. Well
Done.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Joanne! Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine presentation and I felt the symphony of music here between these two lovers who are filled with sensual desire, passion takes us to a new level, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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A fine presentation and I felt the symphony of music here between these two lovers who are filled with sensual desire, passion takes us to a new level, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Dolly! Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Sensual Refrain", is a short and semi-erotic piece. This poet's work was a pleasure, to both read and review. Good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for your.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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"Sensual Refrain", is a short and semi-erotic piece. This poet's work was a pleasure, to both read and review. Good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for your.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you, duchess! Have a wonderful weekend.
Dear Anon,
you're more than welcome.
the Duchess
Comment from Lucy de Welles
Well, we all know who wrote this perfect piece! I want to hang it on my wall. In fact, what a great idea I'm having about now! You should have it printed and distributed. All the posters I've seen lately in the stores are just so boring. Really boring. This would be sensational 24 x 36" framed in slick black.
Everything about it is passionate and beautifully rendered. Made my day.
Lucy
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Well, we all know who wrote this perfect piece! I want to hang it on my wall. In fact, what a great idea I'm having about now! You should have it printed and distributed. All the posters I've seen lately in the stores are just so boring. Really boring. This would be sensational 24 x 36" framed in slick black.
Everything about it is passionate and beautifully rendered. Made my day.
Lucy
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Oh my goodness: such an awesome review... thank you, THANK YOU, Beautiful Lady, for such a wonderful response topped off with stars! I don't usually do too much 'passionate poetry' but once in a while the muse wants to go there and, well, let's be honest:
NEVER ARGUE WITH THE MUSE!!
Am I right? 8-) Take care and enjoy the day!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Stunning and elegant musical imagery--lovely flow--excellent word choice and fresh phrasing. Fine work! This may be a winner. Fingers crossed. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Stunning and elegant musical imagery--lovely flow--excellent word choice and fresh phrasing. Fine work! This may be a winner. Fingers crossed. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you, LIZ! Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent entry into this contest, author. Your soft s sounds accentuate the whispers of lovers and the pleasure their joy orchestrates.
Beautiful presentation and a fine entry. Wishing you much luck with the voters. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Excellent entry into this contest, author. Your soft s sounds accentuate the whispers of lovers and the pleasure their joy orchestrates.
Beautiful presentation and a fine entry. Wishing you much luck with the voters. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Gloria! Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this well-executed piece. That painting is gorgeous and complements your poem well. This is a topic that always lends itself well to poetry, isn't it. Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Congratulations on this well-executed piece. That painting is gorgeous and complements your poem well. This is a topic that always lends itself well to poetry, isn't it. Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Such an awesome review... thank you, THANK YOU, Little Bird, for such a wonderful response topped off with stars! I don't usually do too much 'passionate poetry' but once in a while the muse wants to go there and, well, let's be honest:
NEVER ARGUE WITH THE MUSE!!
Am I right? 8-) Take care and enjoy the day!
Comment from palmart
Wonderful poem that leads reader to bring some self experience to its interpretation: it insinuates more what is said word-by-word . And, same as poem, artwork you choose goes in the same direction: Shows by no showing... Great choice!
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Wonderful poem that leads reader to bring some self experience to its interpretation: it insinuates more what is said word-by-word . And, same as poem, artwork you choose goes in the same direction: Shows by no showing... Great choice!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you, pal mart! Have a wonderful weekend.
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You´re welcome, writer!
You too!
