Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 2-4-6-8 poem as bout lovers who can see and experience the love we can clearly see Ieach other's eyes reflecting theirs and your love.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2020

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Aaaaah.... another hopeless romantic (wink, wink)! ;) :) This such a creative offering for this very limited format contest -- thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls!! ;) :)

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review. Romantic, maybe, hopeless most definitely ;)

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello anonymous

Great entry for the
2-4-6-8 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Your poem is very romantic . Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

Beautifully written 2-4-6-8 poem. I look deep into your eyes and see nothing but the outpouring of love from my love. Beautiful image to go with your lovely words.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from Edward Escobar

Excellent

Excellent well said, as if I could hear these two chanting love words in their moment of happiness, new and refreshing words to elevate the passion of a story eye moment. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review, and for reading my writing.

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

sweet little love poem with a lovely picture to accompany your writing. You have done a good job complying with the contest rules. Best of luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020

Thanks for yourreview. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count
is good, along with the topic.
-Effective use of one
continuous thought.
-You show how much
this person means to you,
and the bond that your share.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review. She means everything to me.

reply by Pam (respa) on 23-Oct-2020

You are very welcome.

Comment from DeboraDyess

Excellent

A bea8utiful love poem in so few syllables! Well done. I didn't see any errors in SPAG, so I believe you're good to go! Best of luck in the contest,
Blessings,
Deb

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Very nicely done. I love how you took advantage of the format in such a way as this feels completely natural. It's a beautiful poem that does a great job building into the final line.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I expect giving and receiving love becomes contagious and grows from a small feeling inside and your poem captured the magic here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.