Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

I think we all come to that point where we have to pick our battles to retain our sanity. Good luck in the contest. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-A very nice image
and presentation, Jesse.
-I am sorry to hear these
things in your notes and poem.
-I am glad to hear about the
good feelings you seemed to
have gained, and it is important
to keep those in tact.
-That view is reinforced
with your closing lines.
-I hope you are doing well,
and that it helped sharing
your feelings.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020

Comment from JLR

Excellent

Jesse your lament surrounding the demise of the eldercare in the times of covid have come through your words.

On the technical side, you have some mixed meter and mixed and forced rhymes but with that said your message comes across honest and authentic.

As a hospice volunteer who has been sidelined due to covid I see and know the limitations that those who are and have been basically in lockdown are missing the most basic need of man or woman, that of human connections.

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 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020