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A poem of faith.15 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I had a rejoice in God my savior day. I had to refocus on Him, the one who fulfills and makes me happy. Thanks you for this poetic reminder.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Roy.
Sal xo
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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I had a rejoice in God my savior day. I had to refocus on Him, the one who fulfills and makes me happy. Thanks you for this poetic reminder.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Roy.
Sal xo
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thanks Sally, for your excellent comments and a great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This thoughtful and thought-provoking Christian poem asks probing questions about our emotions and whether they can be trusted. Of course, they can--but only if we belong to the Lord and have turned our lives and our feelings over to Him.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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This thoughtful and thought-provoking Christian poem asks probing questions about our emotions and whether they can be trusted. Of course, they can--but only if we belong to the Lord and have turned our lives and our feelings over to Him.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thanks Janice, for your wonderful comments and a great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Stunning imagery--miscreant souls--sandstorm twisting--mist blending a haze--chaotic hearts--startling and fresh twist re God's heartbeat vs the usual heart. Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Stunning imagery--miscreant souls--sandstorm twisting--mist blending a haze--chaotic hearts--startling and fresh twist re God's heartbeat vs the usual heart. Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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You earn more pumps Liz, Thanks for your superb comments and a magic card review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Possummagic
I really enjoyed your poem Roy, it was written with a real depth of your faith. You've covered nicely, words, emotions and feelings and finished nicely with truth and trust. Nicely written.PM
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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I really enjoyed your poem Roy, it was written with a real depth of your faith. You've covered nicely, words, emotions and feelings and finished nicely with truth and trust. Nicely written.PM
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much PM , for your empathetic comments and a lovely review, blessings, Roy
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You are most welcome. PM x
Comment from DeboraDyess
Excellent, Roy! We're doing a women's Bible study right now about rejection and the doubt it can create in our minds. Its a hard one, but it's going to be quite worthwhile, I know. God will use it to break the chains of self-doubt and those nasty little voices that most of us (women) hear in our heads from time to time. So your poem was very timely for me!
One thing I noticed:
In your author notes, you said 'thought' instead of 'though'.
POther than that, perfect!
Blessings,
Debs
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Excellent, Roy! We're doing a women's Bible study right now about rejection and the doubt it can create in our minds. Its a hard one, but it's going to be quite worthwhile, I know. God will use it to break the chains of self-doubt and those nasty little voices that most of us (women) hear in our heads from time to time. So your poem was very timely for me!
One thing I noticed:
In your author notes, you said 'thought' instead of 'though'.
POther than that, perfect!
Blessings,
Debs
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thanks Debs, for your terrific comments and review, blessings, Roy
