Scene at a Diner 4
a Pons and Ned script17 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
Kind of a very abrupt, anti climatic ending to the script. I guess a good writer always leaves you wanting more. Very Nice job. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Kind of a very abrupt, anti climatic ending to the script. I guess a good writer always leaves you wanting more. Very Nice job. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Earl
Comment from lyenochka
It's finished already? This one gave me a lot more chuckles. I liked the Holly Toledo, the tongue being tied and forked. I don't know that meal would turn me into a vegetarian for sure. Thanks for the fun!!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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It's finished already? This one gave me a lot more chuckles. I liked the Holly Toledo, the tongue being tied and forked. I don't know that meal would turn me into a vegetarian for sure. Thanks for the fun!!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thank you, lyenochka, for the excellent review and the bump!
Comment from BethShelby
This is very funny script. The bright and the brainy dudes are able to keep the conversation from getting off topic. I hope they will eventually get some doughnuts. It more pleasant than eating tongue's with ulcers and biting the heads of geckos.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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This is very funny script. The bright and the brainy dudes are able to keep the conversation from getting off topic. I hope they will eventually get some doughnuts. It more pleasant than eating tongue's with ulcers and biting the heads of geckos.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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They should eat else where.
Comment from judiverse
I don't think you really needed to make four scenes out of this. Oh, the tongue sounds so disgusting. Especially the ulcerated one. I don't think a sauce would help it. There might be a niche audience for the Dirty Delicious Dozen Donuts or whatever. I can understand the group's desire for donuts after the tongue. Fun with Fed's date who had brunch, followed by lunch. Fun scene. judi
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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I don't think you really needed to make four scenes out of this. Oh, the tongue sounds so disgusting. Especially the ulcerated one. I don't think a sauce would help it. There might be a niche audience for the Dirty Delicious Dozen Donuts or whatever. I can understand the group's desire for donuts after the tongue. Fun with Fed's date who had brunch, followed by lunch. Fun scene. judi
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This diner had slow service which was reflected in the server?s tip.
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Oh, well, some of the people he was serving were slow, too. judi
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This was a great little Pons and Ned script. I have enjoyed this story from the beginning to end and I chuckle throughout their conversations.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This was a great little Pons and Ned script. I have enjoyed this story from the beginning to end and I chuckle throughout their conversations.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thanks, TT
Comment from juliaSjames
Enjoyed your wacky humour, Bill.. Your characters stay true to form. Well, except for the chewy tongue. Great snappy dialogue.
I'm guessing you know these guys pretty well. LOL
Stay safe
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Enjoyed your wacky humour, Bill.. Your characters stay true to form. Well, except for the chewy tongue. Great snappy dialogue.
I'm guessing you know these guys pretty well. LOL
Stay safe
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Julia
Comment from Jay Squires
Just hanging out with my friends again.
Sometimes I can almost follow the train of their thought. That's scary. I had tongue before, in a Basque restaurant. Horrible, horrible stuff. The more you chew, the bigger it gets
Some funny stuff, as usual.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Just hanging out with my friends again.
Sometimes I can almost follow the train of their thought. That's scary. I had tongue before, in a Basque restaurant. Horrible, horrible stuff. The more you chew, the bigger it gets
Some funny stuff, as usual.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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My mother cooked it once. It looked like a human foot going in the pressure cooker.
Comment from Mistydawn
Some of your jokes were corny but funny. these four could make a good comedy team. Your scrip is well-written very enjoyable, except for the eyeball part.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Some of your jokes were corny but funny. these four could make a good comedy team. Your scrip is well-written very enjoyable, except for the eyeball part.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Fish eye swirl?
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Now I've been put of tongue forever!! I didn't like the look of it before, but now, I'll think of ulsers! LOL. So the butchers will now be left with loads of tongue on their plates. Lovely! Well done, I loved this story. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Now I've been put of tongue forever!! I didn't like the look of it before, but now, I'll think of ulsers! LOL. So the butchers will now be left with loads of tongue on their plates. Lovely! Well done, I loved this story. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Sandra. Sorry about the tongue.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Bill, every one of your characters was charming until the very last word,. Perhaps charming is not the right word for fellas like these! how about the word engaging or fascinating or irritating or intimidating or just plain amusing. I will miss them.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Dear Bill, every one of your characters was charming until the very last word,. Perhaps charming is not the right word for fellas like these! how about the word engaging or fascinating or irritating or intimidating or just plain amusing. I will miss them.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Pons and Ned will re-emerge somewhere.
