Lover's Delight
Day or night...8 total reviews
Comment from Roberta Liszcz
Verse is very well written. So many beautiful images. It's so refreshing that passion can be written in subtlety. Congratulations on winning the contest. Look forward to others.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Verse is very well written. So many beautiful images. It's so refreshing that passion can be written in subtlety. Congratulations on winning the contest. Look forward to others.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem, I'm really glad you liked it. :)
Comment from RShipp
The illustration you picked for this poem was a good choice.
The meter of each of the pairing of lines was nicely done.
Best of luck in the Passionate Love in Black and White writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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The illustration you picked for this poem was a good choice.
The meter of each of the pairing of lines was nicely done.
Best of luck in the Passionate Love in Black and White writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thank you for this nice review and your best wishes.. both are appreciated.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written passionate love poem about two lovers that cannot stay untouched when they are together. The passion between them screams to be relieved.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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A very well-written passionate love poem about two lovers that cannot stay untouched when they are together. The passion between them screams to be relieved.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you for taking time to read and review my poem. :)
Comment from sammielwf
Lovers Delight is simply a smorgasbord of physical and emotional reactions. Romantically steamy and deliciously enticing.
Well done Mystery Author.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Lovers Delight is simply a smorgasbord of physical and emotional reactions. Romantically steamy and deliciously enticing.
Well done Mystery Author.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you, that is so kind of you. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Excellent so beautifully written such a nice creative flow and rhyme scheme. Awesome writing prompt entry for passion. Well done love the photo . Fits nicely with your words.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Excellent so beautifully written such a nice creative flow and rhyme scheme. Awesome writing prompt entry for passion. Well done love the photo . Fits nicely with your words.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review and those 6 shiny stars, much appreciated. :)
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A passionate embrace here with fire and intensity, and I enjoyed this journey as these two hearts beat as one, well rhymed and a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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A passionate embrace here with fire and intensity, and I enjoyed this journey as these two hearts beat as one, well rhymed and a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you for such a lovely review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Edward Escobar
This is one fantastic romance written in such a sweet verse of something
beyond the stroke of touch, a deeper stare that came to my mind like a
ballroom moment that captured every aspect of two people more than simply in love. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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This is one fantastic romance written in such a sweet verse of something
beyond the stroke of touch, a deeper stare that came to my mind like a
ballroom moment that captured every aspect of two people more than simply in love. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you for this lovely review...I'm so glad you like it. :)
Comment from Patty Palmer
A very passionate poem of love and excitement! I enjoyed the poem. Your rhyme and rhythm goes together wonderfully. Oh, to be young and in love again! Great job!' Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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A very passionate poem of love and excitement! I enjoyed the poem. Your rhyme and rhythm goes together wonderfully. Oh, to be young and in love again! Great job!' Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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I still remember being young and in love....now I'm old and in love, but it still feels the same. Thank you for this nice review .
