Cheesy Chelsi Chiselchum
a poem19 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
This should have been a rhyming poetry contest entry. It rhymed, made sense, and it was a lot of fun. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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This should have been a rhyming poetry contest entry. It rhymed, made sense, and it was a lot of fun. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Earl, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is hilarious, inventive and a joy to read Bill, you come out with such corkers and Ms Chiselchum found some peace in the end, love Dolly x
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Ha ha ha, this is hilarious, inventive and a joy to read Bill, you come out with such corkers and Ms Chiselchum found some peace in the end, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Dolly, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from patricia dillon
Your poem was very funny, if perhaps rather insensitive towards the mentally ill. Not all of the mentally ill are necessarily dangerous. This perpetuates some stereotypes.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Your poem was very funny, if perhaps rather insensitive towards the mentally ill. Not all of the mentally ill are necessarily dangerous. This perpetuates some stereotypes.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Not all, but Chelsi was crazy.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks a tale of Miss Chelsi Chiselchum, she was engaged with engaged with Barry Bum to marry, but hara-kiri came in between and caged, now Miss is free; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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This poem speaks a tale of Miss Chelsi Chiselchum, she was engaged with engaged with Barry Bum to marry, but hara-kiri came in between and caged, now Miss is free; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thanks, ALD
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
You definitely have a unique, astute and gifted mind and a broadened creative vocabulary which is evident when reviewing your writing. Very descriptive, "Cheesy Chelsi Chiselchum" sparked an interest in reading the rest of the Thriller. The rhyming is excellent. Well planned and expressed. Another excellent entry worthy of top ranking.
All the best!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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You definitely have a unique, astute and gifted mind and a broadened creative vocabulary which is evident when reviewing your writing. Very descriptive, "Cheesy Chelsi Chiselchum" sparked an interest in reading the rest of the Thriller. The rhyming is excellent. Well planned and expressed. Another excellent entry worthy of top ranking.
All the best!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Cecilia
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Thanks, Cecilia
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You are welcome!
Comment from robyn corum
Bill,
hahahaha! Amazing what a little brain surgery can do. *smile* Although, now Cheesy Chelsi only sits and drools, but what's that matter? At least she's not bothering the staff anymore.
Gotta do what you gotta do for peace in the house. ha
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Bill,
hahahaha! Amazing what a little brain surgery can do. *smile* Although, now Cheesy Chelsi only sits and drools, but what's that matter? At least she's not bothering the staff anymore.
Gotta do what you gotta do for peace in the house. ha
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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They were just poking fun at her frontal cortex.
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They were just poking fun at her frontal cortex.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Gruesomely whimsical--gone from missing putts to eating guts!--apropos for the horror contest--can't submit after release--try to get Tom to do it. Cheers. LIZ (hyphenate hara-kiri)
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Gruesomely whimsical--gone from missing putts to eating guts!--apropos for the horror contest--can't submit after release--try to get Tom to do it. Cheers. LIZ (hyphenate hara-kiri)
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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There are thre3 spellings for it.
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
I enjoyed your little rhyme scheme but I am still trying to figure out what it is about lol I have two different thoughts .Quite interesting .Thank you for sharing
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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I enjoyed your little rhyme scheme but I am still trying to figure out what it is about lol I have two different thoughts .Quite interesting .Thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Chelsi went crazy. She was lobotomized.
gotcha that's what I thought lol .cute poem I enjoyed it
Comment from lyenochka
Oh my goodness. This feels like a PG-13, maybe R rated nonsense poem. I guess some limericks fit in that category. It's too bad that she got a lobotomy to finally become "free."
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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Oh my goodness. This feels like a PG-13, maybe R rated nonsense poem. I guess some limericks fit in that category. It's too bad that she got a lobotomy to finally become "free."
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Rhymes words do not always come together well. In her mind she and Barry are golfing.
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I thought your rhymes were great. I liked how the first three lines rhymed and the fourth line rhymed across stanzas.
