Cheesy Chelsi Chiselchum
a poem19 total reviews
Comment from L. Kalere
where in the world did you come up with an idea like this? It's funny and creative and clever. Love the name CheesyChelsi Chiselchum! Congratulations.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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where in the world did you come up with an idea like this? It's funny and creative and clever. Love the name CheesyChelsi Chiselchum! Congratulations.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thanks, LK. I actually have around fifty of these.
Comment from Susanjohn
OMG this is crazy and good and weird and what the heck did I just read here?! LOL BUT, I like it! I mean, of course, her...and after her Lobotomy! 6 stars for making me smile.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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OMG this is crazy and good and weird and what the heck did I just read here?! LOL BUT, I like it! I mean, of course, her...and after her Lobotomy! 6 stars for making me smile.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Susan, for the exceptional review. Bill
Comment from Ulla
Hahahahaha, Bill, where the heck do you get it from? I loved it. She is mad as a hatter, and the deeds she's done is beyond this world, and yet you manage to make a farce of it all. I wish I had a six left in my arsenal. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Hahahahaha, Bill, where the heck do you get it from? I loved it. She is mad as a hatter, and the deeds she's done is beyond this world, and yet you manage to make a farce of it all. I wish I had a six left in my arsenal. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Ulla. That's a band-aid for my poor NY essay.
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Hahahaha, don't be daft! You do make me laugh!!!
Comment from Mistydawn
Wow, what a poem. Guess the old saying holds true about a woman scorned in her case anyway, lol. Barry might've been smart doing what he did, saving himself from her wrath. Your ending is perfect, made me chuckle.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Wow, what a poem. Guess the old saying holds true about a woman scorned in her case anyway, lol. Barry might've been smart doing what he did, saving himself from her wrath. Your ending is perfect, made me chuckle.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thanks, MD. She was a bit off.
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Just a tad I'd say, lol.
Comment from royowen
I had to have a giggle at this, what a hal this little lady is, she had to be calmed down before she could be considered a decent spouse, it was the lobotomy that dis it in the end, Cheesy Chelsi Chiselbum, beautfully written Bill, clever poem, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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I had to have a giggle at this, what a hal this little lady is, she had to be calmed down before she could be considered a decent spouse, it was the lobotomy that dis it in the end, Cheesy Chelsi Chiselbum, beautfully written Bill, clever poem, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Roy. She was a caution.
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Good job Bill
Comment from Mastery
Bill, your imagination is a true gift, my friend. LOL Great rhymes and fun at the same time.
Great way to finish:
"Now Ms. Chiselchum is free,
her life's what it ought to be,
after her lobotomy,
no more wars are waged."
Thanks for this. Bob
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Bill, your imagination is a true gift, my friend. LOL Great rhymes and fun at the same time.
Great way to finish:
"Now Ms. Chiselchum is free,
her life's what it ought to be,
after her lobotomy,
no more wars are waged."
Thanks for this. Bob
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Bob. I hadn?t written one of these People Poems in awhile.
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I know. :) Bob
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I know. :) Bob
Comment from damommy
You know some of the strangest people. hahaha. I enjoyed reading this. I liked the nonsense of it, and especially the name.
Keep 'em comin'. They're such fun.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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You know some of the strangest people. hahaha. I enjoyed reading this. I liked the nonsense of it, and especially the name.
Keep 'em comin'. They're such fun.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Yvonne.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Bill, this poem is a lot of syllabic foolery that you like to write. But the poem, interestingly enough, makes sense.
I am glad Mrs. Chiselchum got a lobotomy, she really needed one.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Dear Bill, this poem is a lot of syllabic foolery that you like to write. But the poem, interestingly enough, makes sense.
I am glad Mrs. Chiselchum got a lobotomy, she really needed one.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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I?d rather have a bottle in front of me than a frontal lobotomy.
Comment from nomi338
Good thing too. Who knows, she might be the very next person I run into in this crazy, hazy world. While she was busy eating guts, she should have been eating brains to replace the one that went haywire inside her own skull.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Good thing too. Who knows, she might be the very next person I run into in this crazy, hazy world. While she was busy eating guts, she should have been eating brains to replace the one that went haywire inside her own skull.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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She lacked brains, but was quite gutsy.
Comment from BethShelby
This was fun to read even though a bit crazy. I see the first three lines of each stanza rhymes and the last line of each stanza rhymes with last line of the other stanzas.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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This was fun to read even though a bit crazy. I see the first three lines of each stanza rhymes and the last line of each stanza rhymes with last line of the other stanzas.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Beth, for giving this a look. Bill
