Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I hope my poetry is my legacy like you state in your words. Your poem has meaning and is reflective of those who have passed on before us. There is a smooth flow to your poem and all of us can relate to your words.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

We all crave to be remembered
Always Remember Me
by jaybird1

Hello, Mr Jay,

I will remember your poems, it's a beautiful legacy. I hope my children will remember me after I die. I think it's a very human feeling. Well done

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

You are going strong. I don' think your days are numbered. As long you are writing poetry, you will be fine. Yes. You will be remembered for your Sonnets.

Well done.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This poem has good advice in living life to the fullest. We have to be positive to enjoy the gift of life even throught today's troubles.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

Comment from Susan Larson

Exceptional

Jaybird, I have absolutely no doubt that you will long be remembered for your poetry. Your great great grandchildren all through the decades will read and relate to all you have written. What a legacy you will leave them!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

To be remembered is to have your life riddled with meaning. It shows you went out in the world and at least touched one soul. It is what you leave behind that will show who you were in life.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

good advise as you usual give to your readers.
well written reminder to live today and hopefully leave something to be remembered by.
Best wishes always.
Mary

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This value added poem speaks meaning, making of life and crave for remembering, poet wishes to be remembered by his poems; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

Comment from Ben B.

Exceptional

But you never actually did say what your hope was. I guess that is one mystery left for meant for us to figure it out. Thank you for sharing your hopes with us.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you so much for sharing your poetry here, Jaybird! You will be remembered through these poems you've written. I liked your "gardens of stones" - such a poetic way to call a cemetery.

"and fought lifes battles," (life's)

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020