Always Remember Me
We all crave to be remembered64 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Very lovely writing . That is absolutely amazing to have been writing for 75 years. I have wrote off and on over the years but its only since august this year I've really gotten into it. I write every day now and I love it and my favorite is to write in rhyme as well. Love these lines. Our earthly days are numbered here. Hold each you have as very dear. Just live your life, while still live in memory, you will survive. When my time comes, my hope will be remember dear, my poetry . Really enjoyable read.
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Very lovely writing . That is absolutely amazing to have been writing for 75 years. I have wrote off and on over the years but its only since august this year I've really gotten into it. I write every day now and I love it and my favorite is to write in rhyme as well. Love these lines. Our earthly days are numbered here. Hold each you have as very dear. Just live your life, while still live in memory, you will survive. When my time comes, my hope will be remember dear, my poetry . Really enjoyable read.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
Comment from Alchera
"When my time comes, my hope will be--
Remember dear, my poetry."
I like the whole Elizabethian sonnet throughout its structural narrative storyline but I prefer best the ending couplet.Another amazing life's poem of yours Jay! great thought and work!
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"When my time comes, my hope will be--
Remember dear, my poetry."
I like the whole Elizabethian sonnet throughout its structural narrative storyline but I prefer best the ending couplet.Another amazing life's poem of yours Jay! great thought and work!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
Comment from zanya
Words of wisdom here reminding us of our finale on this earth - so often we tend to forget that 'Our earthly days are numbered here'- a joy to read and thanks for sharing
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Words of wisdom here reminding us of our finale on this earth - so often we tend to forget that 'Our earthly days are numbered here'- a joy to read and thanks for sharing
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello Jay,
I pray you are doing well. This is a lovely poem about living your life until your time is ready to go home to your Father. I'm sure you will be remembered by all your lovely poems. Your poems are usually filled with compassion, love and wisdom. As always, your rhyming is very good. Wonderful poem. Thanks.
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Hello Jay,
I pray you are doing well. This is a lovely poem about living your life until your time is ready to go home to your Father. I'm sure you will be remembered by all your lovely poems. Your poems are usually filled with compassion, love and wisdom. As always, your rhyming is very good. Wonderful poem. Thanks.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
Comment from equestrik
This is a lovely poem and even though some might say it is sad, I like the way it rhymes and has a lovely rhythm. Yes, Life should be lived fully to the best of each one's ability. Good writing, sir.
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This is a lovely poem and even though some might say it is sad, I like the way it rhymes and has a lovely rhythm. Yes, Life should be lived fully to the best of each one's ability. Good writing, sir.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
Comment from jenintorre
Yes of course I will remember your poetry while I'm still here to tell the tale. I love it that you write such profound words in such a simple and well rhymed style and hope that you will be writing many more poems. Love Jen.
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Yes of course I will remember your poetry while I'm still here to tell the tale. I love it that you write such profound words in such a simple and well rhymed style and hope that you will be writing many more poems. Love Jen.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You will always be remembered here, Bill, for your poems filled with wisdom. Our writings, poetry and prose are our legacy for our friends and family to remember and enjoy long after we have gone. I enjoy reading your words, because they are full of such wise words. This one is another such poem. Well done, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
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You will always be remembered here, Bill, for your poems filled with wisdom. Our writings, poetry and prose are our legacy for our friends and family to remember and enjoy long after we have gone. I enjoy reading your words, because they are full of such wise words. This one is another such poem. Well done, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I appreciate your note
and poem, jaybird.
-I was an English major,
high school English teacher,
and am still an avid reader.
-Writing poetry came later
in life for me, and it has
been a blessing during this
difficult year.
-You wrote a very good poem
about those you remember,
and conclude it well with
how you want to be remembered
because poetry was important to you.
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-I appreciate your note
and poem, jaybird.
-I was an English major,
high school English teacher,
and am still an avid reader.
-Writing poetry came later
in life for me, and it has
been a blessing during this
difficult year.
-You wrote a very good poem
about those you remember,
and conclude it well with
how you want to be remembered
because poetry was important to you.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I do believe you will be remembered for your poetry, Bill. I have the same hopes and dreams. My children love my poetry and I have a few people on here that enjoy what I post every time I post. It is a good feeling to be appreciated for your view of life. Well done my, friend. Nancy:)
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I do believe you will be remembered for your poetry, Bill. I have the same hopes and dreams. My children love my poetry and I have a few people on here that enjoy what I post every time I post. It is a good feeling to be appreciated for your view of life. Well done my, friend. Nancy:)
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You poetry will stand the test of time and you will always be remembered by it with fondness and your skilfully written poem here is a joy to read, love Dolly x
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You poetry will stand the test of time and you will always be remembered by it with fondness and your skilfully written poem here is a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
