Always Remember Me
We all crave to be remembered64 total reviews
Comment from fairydancer
Your last two lines made me go aww. Nice sentiment. Good form, excellent rhyming. Like the term "gardens of stone" ...instantly understandable, good imagery.
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Your last two lines made me go aww. Nice sentiment. Good form, excellent rhyming. Like the term "gardens of stone" ...instantly understandable, good imagery.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Yes, I want to be remembered well. I have this fear no one will have anything to say about me at my funeral. I've already started paying people to say wonderful things. I have no doubt you will be remembered well and many will have great things to say about you. You should, if you haven't already self-publish a book of your poems for your family. Well done as always.
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Yes, I want to be remembered well. I have this fear no one will have anything to say about me at my funeral. I've already started paying people to say wonderful things. I have no doubt you will be remembered well and many will have great things to say about you. You should, if you haven't already self-publish a book of your poems for your family. Well done as always.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I always get a little worried about who will find all my writings. It'll take the right person to find them and understand the words. And being a writer for so long, I'm sure I still have stuff at my parents house I will find again. Writers certainly leave a lot behind for everyone.
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I always get a little worried about who will find all my writings. It'll take the right person to find them and understand the words. And being a writer for so long, I'm sure I still have stuff at my parents house I will find again. Writers certainly leave a lot behind for everyone.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
Comment from nomi338
I can pretty much guarantee you that if you continue writing as you are currently doing, you will without doubt, be remembered. You have a style that is coherent, understandable and very easy to read.
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I can pretty much guarantee you that if you continue writing as you are currently doing, you will without doubt, be remembered. You have a style that is coherent, understandable and very easy to read.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a stunning write and an excellent message, especially for these trying times. The rhyming rhythm was smooth in flow and a pleasure to read, silently and aloud...
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In my opinion, a stunning write and an excellent message, especially for these trying times. The rhyming rhythm was smooth in flow and a pleasure to read, silently and aloud...
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
Comment from Susanjohn
Beautifully written and expressed... yes, we all wish to be remembered, but the poets so often put those thoughts to words...lovely words :-)
favorite lines..."Our earthly days are numbered here.
Hold each you have as very dear."
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Beautifully written and expressed... yes, we all wish to be remembered, but the poets so often put those thoughts to words...lovely words :-)
favorite lines..."Our earthly days are numbered here.
Hold each you have as very dear."
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is clear and concise. Well written. Well done. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your poem. Thanks for sharing! Good job.
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is clear and concise. Well written. Well done. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like your poem. Thanks for sharing! Good job.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the words you choose to go with your poem,
they truly touched my heart and soul.
you captured my attention from the start
thank you for sharing,
I was in the hospital again since October the ninth, got home Oct 21. hope to caught to you and write more
Cookie
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I love the words you choose to go with your poem,
they truly touched my heart and soul.
you captured my attention from the start
thank you for sharing,
I was in the hospital again since October the ninth, got home Oct 21. hope to caught to you and write more
Cookie
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
Comment from Therese Caron
Beautifully written, yet very sad. I think many people will remember your poetry, and many will remember you. Your second stanza is outstanding. This poem flows well, and will resonate with many. Thank you for sharing it. Lovely poem.
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Beautifully written, yet very sad. I think many people will remember your poetry, and many will remember you. Your second stanza is outstanding. This poem flows well, and will resonate with many. Thank you for sharing it. Lovely poem.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
Comment from robyn corum
Jay,
Oh, wow. How pretty! My favorite line of all was the 'strolling through gardens of stone'. What a magical way to describe a graveyard!
The rest was just as fun. Thanks so much!
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Jay,
Oh, wow. How pretty! My favorite line of all was the 'strolling through gardens of stone'. What a magical way to describe a graveyard!
The rest was just as fun. Thanks so much!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
