Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

What an enjoyable Dribble Flash Fiction contest entry! Mother dogs love their puppies and the puppies adore her. Oh, I hope this entry does well in the contest!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020

Thank you Rebecca. There's something special about seeing newborn pups.
Geoff

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 19-Oct-2020

I know!

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

A great dribble flash from the pup's perspective. I love these early weeks in human and animal life.

Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs....

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020

Thanks very much Sally. Glad you enjoyed.
Geoff

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Wils,

A simple piece, but a really cute one. I don't think I've ever heard the birth story from the dog's mouth. haha

This is sweet and makes a cute little entry for the contest. BTW, that profile image is PRECIOUS!

Thanks and good luck!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you liked the profile pic, we lost her in March after 15 years.
Geoff

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

We all come into the world unaware of what awaits us.
Some have a softer, safer introduction to the world than others.

Best of luck with the judges.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written dribble flash fiction about the newborn puppy that find his own place safely near his mother next to his brother where he can fill his little tummy with warm mother's milk.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Geoff

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Very nicely done. I enjoyed how you personified the puppy. A creative and enjoyable write. When I read the "tongue" link I was thinking - oh boy, what am I reading - but a big smile on my face resulted as I read on. Great job.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020

Thanks for your review. I could have made that tongue "interesting" but it was too early in the morning lol
Geoff