The Gates of Dawn
A Reverie55 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
TFAWCUS,
This is your second work that has caught my attention and I enjoyed both.
Here you give your reader the vision and feeling of peace that the night brings and that the dawn brings a new beginning.
Very well done. There is no head scratching to figure out your message as it is clear and beautifully done.
Mary
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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TFAWCUS,
This is your second work that has caught my attention and I enjoyed both.
Here you give your reader the vision and feeling of peace that the night brings and that the dawn brings a new beginning.
Very well done. There is no head scratching to figure out your message as it is clear and beautifully done.
Mary
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thanks very much for your review and kind words, Mary. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Sally Law
A beautiful penned poem, dear Tony. I felt caught up somewhere between earth and heaven. Stellar offering for the rhyming poetry contest.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best with your entry,
Sal XOs....
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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A beautiful penned poem, dear Tony. I felt caught up somewhere between earth and heaven. Stellar offering for the rhyming poetry contest.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best with your entry,
Sal XOs....
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thanks very much for your review and kind words, Sally. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Beautifully written! The rhyme is splendid, the rhythm perfect.
A very moving and wonderful place to be to pass through gates of dawn as if reborn. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Beautifully written! The rhyme is splendid, the rhythm perfect.
A very moving and wonderful place to be to pass through gates of dawn as if reborn. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thanks very much for your review and kind words, Patty. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Reverie
The Gates of Dawn
by tfawcus
Hello, Tony,
Beautiful presentation! Great entry for the Rhyming Poem contest. Your rhyme is smooth and melodic... well done. I love the celestial imagery. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Reverie
The Gates of Dawn
by tfawcus
Hello, Tony,
Beautiful presentation! Great entry for the Rhyming Poem contest. Your rhyme is smooth and melodic... well done. I love the celestial imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thanks very much for your review and kind words, Gypsy. Appreciated. All good wishes, Tony.
Comment from Susan Larson
Well you certainly did an excellent job of writing a rhyming poem for the rhyming contest! I love this line: "It holds me in its hallowed palm.
The air is calm," Wishing you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Well you certainly did an excellent job of writing a rhyming poem for the rhyming contest! I love this line: "It holds me in its hallowed palm.
The air is calm," Wishing you well in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Many thanks for your review, Susan, and for your good wishes. All the best, Tony.
Comment from mermaids
There is a light feel and flow to your words. "Through mists a mystic presence flows" is a delicious use of words. I like the smooth flow of the letter "M" words and a spiritual feel comes through clearly here. Mist does appear as if it is alive with a presence.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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There is a light feel and flow to your words. "Through mists a mystic presence flows" is a delicious use of words. I like the smooth flow of the letter "M" words and a spiritual feel comes through clearly here. Mist does appear as if it is alive with a presence.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much for reviewing this and for your comments about that particular line. It?s always good to hear when something resonates with a reader. Most affirming. Best wishes, Tony.
Comment from June Sargent
To feel this kind of serenity is priceless. And there is certainly something very special about the early morning when things start coming to life. We are imbued with fresh energy and look forward to the challenges of the new day...beyond the gates.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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To feel this kind of serenity is priceless. And there is certainly something very special about the early morning when things start coming to life. We are imbued with fresh energy and look forward to the challenges of the new day...beyond the gates.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thanks, June. As you say, dawn is a very special time. I'm delighted you enjoyed my poem. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from Ulla
Wow, Tony, this is such a wonderful rhyming poem I so enjoyed reading. Its tranquil notes resonated with me, and I find that it is a wonderful entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Wow, Tony, this is such a wonderful rhyming poem I so enjoyed reading. Its tranquil notes resonated with me, and I find that it is a wonderful entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Very many thanks, Ulla, for your lovely review. I'm delighted that my poem resonated with you, and I appreciate your good luck wishes for the contest. All the best, Tony
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Nothing is more beautiful than a sun set. Texas does a great job of that. You did a wonderful job writing this poem about it. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Nothing is more beautiful than a sun set. Texas does a great job of that. You did a wonderful job writing this poem about it. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Very many thanks, Barbara, for your lovely review. I'm delighted that my poem resonated with you, and I appreciate your good luck wishes for the contest. All the best, Tony
Comment from Janetsue
The natural cycle of sunrise to sunset is represented here...along with the changing emotions involved and the poet's personal response to calming influences bringing relief from moments of alarm. I enjoyed reading it very much, Tony. :-) Janet
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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The natural cycle of sunrise to sunset is represented here...along with the changing emotions involved and the poet's personal response to calming influences bringing relief from moments of alarm. I enjoyed reading it very much, Tony. :-) Janet
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Very many thanks, Janet, for your lovely review. I'm delighted that you enjoyed my poem, and I appreciate your good luck wishes for the contest. All the best, Tony
