Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Hi Misty. This is a very well written continuation to your story. I hate the subject but I find it's good that address a problem that is horrific in its nature. I'm not a violent person, but I know what I would like to do to men who commit those vile acts against children. It would involve a very sharp knife. I'm looking forward to the continuation. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020

Thank you so much for reading my chapter and for your fabulous six-stars, I'm honored. This is horrific the way they are treated. I think a lot of us would agree with you, supply the knife. I think it should be really dull, one you'd have to saw back and forth. Make them feel a small portion of the pain they've caused.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.

reply by Ulla on 18-Oct-2020

True, the knife should be dull, you're right. I hope many will read your story. :)))

reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020

I think it should also be recorded, put on the web. To humiliate him, and serve as a warning.

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Sounds as though they are about to close in on the scum that is running the child trafficking ring. I hope so! Lock them up and throw away the key. Well done. Dawn. Nancy:)

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 Comment Written 18-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020

Thank you so much for reading my chapter. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It won't be long and the scum bags will be where they belong. Unfortunately, they are a few of hundreds.
Thank you again for all your help, support, friendship,and encouragement. It always means the world to me, take care.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is interesting and well written. Some of it seems a little confusing to me because I don't remember some of what happened before this chapter. I'm going to look back and see if I accidently missed a chapter. This is very intriguing.

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 Comment Written 18-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020

Thank you so much for reading my chapter, I'm glad you enjoyed it, but sorry it left you confused. Kevin was talking to other kids when Penny's cousin told him what she'd said about the piano teacher. He was about to interview her when the sergeant called. The phone calls are from the first victim's phone, the one hung in the shed. They traced the cell phone signal to a coffee shop that's where they found the exchange on their security cameras. The list of names came from running their picture through the system. I hope this helps. If not please let me know.
Thank you again for all your support, encouragement, and friendship. It always means so much to me, take care.