Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is similar to the Duotrain in the 8/6/8/6 format and rhyming scheme. I would say this is a lovely offering, but let's just call it--"so special."

Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs.....

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020

Hi Sal :)
Thank you for your feedback, I appreciate it.
Best wishes, Debra x

Comment from Cynthia Adams1

Excellent

This was a cute, earthy poem.
I have a relatively weak stomach when it comes to things like poo but you made it enjoyable to read.
Dogs are just the coolest.
This is a really nice entry in the 8-6 contest. Good luck.


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 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020

Thank you for your feedback, I appreciate it :)

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL!! And eeeewwww! But, ya know, when I was growing up (country girl, here) one of our dogs had the same 'thing' as Molly does but it was for dead animals... no matter how long dead - YUCK! A very well written ballad and fun offering for the contest, my lady -- best of luck! :) Yvette

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 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020

Hi Yvette :)
Thank you for your feedback, I appreciate it.
Best wishes, Debra x