Kaleidoscope of Mind
Remembering is something to be valued.2 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A great metaphorical ballad offering for the contest here, Harry -- Thanx so much for sharing, sir, and best of luck in the contest! ;)
some good others are bad --> some are good others bad [suggestion only... feel free to ignore :)]
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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A great metaphorical ballad offering for the contest here, Harry -- Thanx so much for sharing, sir, and best of luck in the contest! ;)
some good others are bad --> some are good others bad [suggestion only... feel free to ignore :)]
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Never ignore your suggestions and always appreciated. Thanks for the read and comments.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an interesting poem, particularly because of the vocabulary you have chosen, and how you used it.
twisting our mindscope, for example is quite some image.
My favourite of all is nothing so exotic, but a tender thought:
fragile memory glass
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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This is an interesting poem, particularly because of the vocabulary you have chosen, and how you used it.
twisting our mindscope, for example is quite some image.
My favourite of all is nothing so exotic, but a tender thought:
fragile memory glass
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thanks for your read and your encouraging words.
