A Murder a Month
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "A Murder a Month: Valentine"Twelve homicides in this year are linked somehow
21 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Smooth dialogue. I love that Piglette is pronounced Peeshlay, a touch of French? The Valentine is adorable and the wording resonates with the situation. So far, so good. Murder #2.
Ralf
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Smooth dialogue. I love that Piglette is pronounced Peeshlay, a touch of French? The Valentine is adorable and the wording resonates with the situation. So far, so good. Murder #2.
Ralf
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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The intention was to do twelve murders, but plans change. Thanks for following. : )
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought you did a great job with this chapter. The details on the investigation are slowly being brought to the surface. It's interesting and holds your interest. I thought the final line really setup the next chapter. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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I thought you did a great job with this chapter. The details on the investigation are slowly being brought to the surface. It's interesting and holds your interest. I thought the final line really setup the next chapter. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Thanks, Michael, for giving this a look.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Wickedly witty. Delightfully clever.
That johnson line and its misinterpretation by Piglette earns your stars in itself--I expect some reviewers will correct your "typos" bio shorter than your partner's Johnson to bio shorter than your partner, Johnson.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Wickedly witty. Delightfully clever.
That johnson line and its misinterpretation by Piglette earns your stars in itself--I expect some reviewers will correct your "typos" bio shorter than your partner's Johnson to bio shorter than your partner, Johnson.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Thanks, Liz, for giving this a look.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Yup, usually is the best friend the culprit, for money and glory let's kill the anchovy:)sorry my rhyme sucks. Anyway I enjoy your play and I am curious to see what is going to happen on the next round.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Yup, usually is the best friend the culprit, for money and glory let's kill the anchovy:)sorry my rhyme sucks. Anyway I enjoy your play and I am curious to see what is going to happen on the next round.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Thanks, Iza
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Catching up! Poor Piglette, lol, it's a shame he can't twist Bull Schlitz's name into something rude. At least he seems to know what he's looking at, and sussed out the murderer might have been a friend. I can see the reasoning to that, too. Off to the next one! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Catching up! Poor Piglette, lol, it's a shame he can't twist Bull Schlitz's name into something rude. At least he seems to know what he's looking at, and sussed out the murderer might have been a friend. I can see the reasoning to that, too. Off to the next one! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Sandra, for giving this a look.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
But what about the Valentine...? :) Okay, so patiently waiting on the next part here... ;) :) Bull and Piglet make a fun team, Bill, although I'm quite sure that was your intent! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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But what about the Valentine...? :) Okay, so patiently waiting on the next part here... ;) :) Bull and Piglet make a fun team, Bill, although I'm quite sure that was your intent! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Valentine will be looked at again as the investigation continues. I'm trying to keep each chapter to around two hundred words. Why? Not sure. Discipline I guess.
Comment from ESOSTINE
Great detective story line there, Bill. I always find your choice of words quite interesting. The dialog was equally very fascinating to me. Thanks for sharing your story.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Great detective story line there, Bill. I always find your choice of words quite interesting. The dialog was equally very fascinating to me. Thanks for sharing your story.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thanks, ESOSTINE
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Thanks, ESOSTINE
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Bill. LOL. Humor in this one too, I see. A comedic detctive/cop storry is needed on this site, so have at it, my friend
""The guy's name was Dulce Coraz�³n. His bio is shorter than your partner's johnson." Ah, yes, Bill strikes again.
Not sure where this is going but I'll roll with it. Take care. Bob
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Hi, Bill. LOL. Humor in this one too, I see. A comedic detctive/cop storry is needed on this site, so have at it, my friend
""The guy's name was Dulce Coraz�³n. His bio is shorter than your partner's johnson." Ah, yes, Bill strikes again.
Not sure where this is going but I'll roll with it. Take care. Bob
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Bob. We?ll both be surprised.
Comment from Earl Corp
Your name choices in your stories are always hilarious, Piglette is a funny one. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Your name choices in your stories are always hilarious, Piglette is a funny one. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Earl
Comment from utilized time
This story sure does make you want to read more. I like the piglette's name. Great job. The gun says " I aim to please you". Very interesting A+++
In the author notes it says stab would but I think you meant stab wound.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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This story sure does make you want to read more. I like the piglette's name. Great job. The gun says " I aim to please you". Very interesting A+++
In the author notes it says stab would but I think you meant stab wound.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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You are right. I?m glad you liked the story so far.
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You are correct.
