Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Oh I got it, and it made perfect sense. Some poems that I read truly do suck. If I feel that the writer just needs to work harder and that they show the potential to improve, I will give them a break. If I feel however, that they are just lazy, they will never know that I read their work as I refuse to give them a written review.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!

reply by nomi338 on 17-Oct-2020

Whether you meant it to or not, it had a message that I picked up on and it resonated with me.

reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020

I'm glad it did that for you.

Comment from palmart

Excellent

Your poem brings attention based on the thinking of "Hey, if the writer refers to it so badly, it would be definitively bad", but after reading it you surprise with some rhyming and tough wording. You made all of this travel in just one -line title and three parts. You arrived from the backyard! Creativity in a strange way!

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!

reply by palmart on 16-Oct-2020

You´re very welcome, Raul1!! Sometimes, opposite ends, meet somewhere. In this case, it was in your poem!

Have a great weekend!

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020

Thanks, my friend! You have a great weekend also!

reply by palmart on 16-Oct-2020

You´re very welcome, Raul1!

If you have the opportunity, feel free to visit my last posting and if you consider it, leave a comment on your point of view. It is welcome!

Have a great time!

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

I think you had some fun with thi write and because of that, it ws fun o read. Your illutration went well wih your writing. I enjoyed it and wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020

Thanks! I hope that I win. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!