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Brevette poetry21 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Melissa, well thought out Brevette and the first I've heard of it. Even the spell check is puzzled LOL! I like your words - they follow the rules and are true to a point. The picture is adorable. Nice Work - regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Hello Melissa, well thought out Brevette and the first I've heard of it. Even the spell check is puzzled LOL! I like your words - they follow the rules and are true to a point. The picture is adorable. Nice Work - regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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This form was new to me too. I found it yesterday when I was reviewing Joan E.. and just had to try it! Fun!! Thanks bunches!
Melissa
Comment from Mistydawn
What an adorable picture. The sweet smile on the little girls face, the look of the wolf you can see they share a special bond. Your poem says it all. Just when I think I've seen all the formats you show me to another.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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What an adorable picture. The sweet smile on the little girls face, the look of the wolf you can see they share a special bond. Your poem says it all. Just when I think I've seen all the formats you show me to another.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review... I found this Brevette form when I reviewed Joan E yesterday... just had to jump up and try one. Others have said that Roy wrote one a few days ago. Fun.
Melissa
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have creatively and skillfully met the challenge of saying something poetic and meaningful in three words, which convey a moving message about the power of love. GREAT artwork
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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You have creatively and skillfully met the challenge of saying something poetic and meaningful in three words, which convey a moving message about the power of love. GREAT artwork
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Hi Janice. Thank you!! It WAS a challenge!!
Melissa
Comment from Mark D. R.
Melissa,
This is fantastic! The photograph is an exceptional companion for your few words and the small girl. I often share posts with my spouse. She said, "Soooo cute!" She has excellent tastes.
Mark
P.S. Not a fan of italic fonts even for this gentle poem, but methinks if you bold your text, the presentation value to other FS reviewers will improve. Your post would have made a great entry for a one line contest!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Melissa,
This is fantastic! The photograph is an exceptional companion for your few words and the small girl. I often share posts with my spouse. She said, "Soooo cute!" She has excellent tastes.
Mark
P.S. Not a fan of italic fonts even for this gentle poem, but methinks if you bold your text, the presentation value to other FS reviewers will improve. Your post would have made a great entry for a one line contest!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Hi Mark. Thanks SO much... I love this review and take your comments to heart. Tell your wife I said .. thank you too.. :). Will step over and take another look at presentation.
Melissa
Comment from Pantygynt
This one complements the picture and the picture complements the poem two as one is left wondering who loves who while concluding that in all probability it is mutual.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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This one complements the picture and the picture complements the poem two as one is left wondering who loves who while concluding that in all probability it is mutual.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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A fun review, Jim. :). Thank you!
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a sweet post Melissa and this is a clever and endearing post Melissa. Not heard of this form before so I am learning from you, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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This is such a sweet post Melissa and this is a clever and endearing post Melissa. Not heard of this form before so I am learning from you, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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I read a Brevette for the first time yesterday when reviewing Joan E... I loved it and wanted to try one too. :). Thanks a bunch, Dolly.
Melissa
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Brevette it takes a lot of effort to say something sensible with only three words and you successfully execute this message where love is there can't be fear.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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A very well-written Brevette it takes a lot of effort to say something sensible with only three words and you successfully execute this message where love is there can't be fear.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you Sandra. It took a while to come up with something. :)
Melissa
Comment from Gloria ....
That is a real nice photo. The little fox looks pretty enamored with the little girl. Excellent complement for a fine brevette, a form which I have yet to try. I saw Roy try one first and though it was most cool and yours works beautifully, Melissa. :)
Thanks for sharing.
Gloria
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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That is a real nice photo. The little fox looks pretty enamored with the little girl. Excellent complement for a fine brevette, a form which I have yet to try. I saw Roy try one first and though it was most cool and yours works beautifully, Melissa. :)
Thanks for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Hi Gloria. I was reviewing Joan E and saw this form for the first time yesterday. I was enamored and had to try it. :). Thank you. I know you will enjoy the challenge.
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
That's so adorable! Is that an albino fox? And your poem matches this picture so perfectly as neither the child nor the animal have any fear because of the love they feel for each other. Great little brevette!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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That's so adorable! Is that an albino fox? And your poem matches this picture so perfectly as neither the child nor the animal have any fear because of the love they feel for each other. Great little brevette!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Hi Helen. While I was reviewing Joan E, I saw the Brevette form for the first time. I was enchanted. I felt challenged and just had to try one too. You are so right about the child and fox... they adore each other. :). Thank you.
Melissa
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Roy was the first one I saw write one. Then there were others. I'm so glad you added yours. I can't come up with just three words for a poem! 💖
Comment from palmart
Wow! You packed a message in just three words! Thad's a powerful sense of summarizing ideas! Congratulations!
Picture conveys an identical idea by showing a child in front of a wild animal, but both melt in a lovely sight!! Poetry comes in two ways (and, commercially speaking, two for the value of one!) (Just a bit of humour)
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Wow! You packed a message in just three words! Thad's a powerful sense of summarizing ideas! Congratulations!
Picture conveys an identical idea by showing a child in front of a wild animal, but both melt in a lovely sight!! Poetry comes in two ways (and, commercially speaking, two for the value of one!) (Just a bit of humour)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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LOL... loved your comments. So fun! Thank you.
Melissa
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Nice to read you and perceive your sense of humour as well, Sugarray77!
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