Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Beautiful entry into the 20 word contest in celebration of FanStory's 20th Anniversary. You illustrated the inexplicable force of poetry at both end of the spectrum.

Awesome entry and I wish you great luck with the Contest Committee. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020

Thank you so very much Gloria. I had missed the deadline for this year, but April will be here before we know it. Ha! Thank you.

Melissa

Comment from equestrik

Exceptional

This is a moving and beautiful poem all the way around. The picture is stunning and your poem speaks to the power poetry can have for readers. Best of luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020

Hello Equestrik. Thank you so very much for your lovely review!!!

Melissa

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

In just twenty well-chosen words, you have made a profound statement
about the power of poetry--the wide scope of its effects on the poet and the reader.

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020

Thank you Janice!

Melissa

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

A wind swept poem, how unique and eye-catching. Of course, this is perfectly penned. A lovely offering for the twenty word poem. Sending you all my best for the contesr,,
Sal XOs....

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020

Thank you Sally!! I like it that you said ... wind swept... I was going for the movement that inherent in a poem. :). Thank you.

Melissa