Time,Forever Lost
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Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for joining in the rhyming poem contest and your timely message! Yes, this time of disease and division is very much a war! Let's pray for the victory of peace and health.
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Thank you for joining in the rhyming poem contest and your timely message! Yes, this time of disease and division is very much a war! Let's pray for the victory of peace and health.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
Comment from Cindy Decker
Jaybird,
This is another stellar poet you've written! God delegated us to together help the tumultuous world, on every turn.
One note: 3rd stanza, 3rd line from bottom of stanza,
should be while far 'too.'
A fantastic poem about harmony and working together for a good end.
Good luck in the contest good friend,
Best wishes,
Cindy
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Jaybird,
This is another stellar poet you've written! God delegated us to together help the tumultuous world, on every turn.
One note: 3rd stanza, 3rd line from bottom of stanza,
should be while far 'too.'
A fantastic poem about harmony and working together for a good end.
Good luck in the contest good friend,
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, you are so right about things here, Jaybird -- and beautifully stated in your unique pen! ;) This division cannot continue... sigh. Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
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Oh, you are so right about things here, Jaybird -- and beautifully stated in your unique pen! ;) This division cannot continue... sigh. Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Always a treat Jaybird1 to find your writing in my "mailbox"
This one is sums up about what a reader feels, tired of the division and pulling apart and wanting to be whole again.
Your right in that with faith and hope we may just be able to be whole again.
Very best wishes.
Mary
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Always a treat Jaybird1 to find your writing in my "mailbox"
This one is sums up about what a reader feels, tired of the division and pulling apart and wanting to be whole again.
Your right in that with faith and hope we may just be able to be whole again.
Very best wishes.
Mary
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
