"Cup of Smiles"
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Until She Again Comes Home?"Poetry at his finest.
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Comment from Eternal Muse
A touching poem about waiting for someone special to come home. I can see the anticipation and love pouring in every line. Lovely artistic presentation with an amazing artwork.
Good creative imagery and visuals; thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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A touching poem about waiting for someone special to come home. I can see the anticipation and love pouring in every line. Lovely artistic presentation with an amazing artwork.
Good creative imagery and visuals; thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Thank Muse for your continued support of my works.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "'I shall gently lay them down where she rests.'
'For she has *Died.'", not because of what happened to the woman in mention but because I was not expecting that dramatic twist right at the very end!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Matthew 5:4
New International Version
4 Blessed are those who mourn,
for they will be comforted.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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My favorite part was, "'I shall gently lay them down where she rests.'
'For she has *Died.'", not because of what happened to the woman in mention but because I was not expecting that dramatic twist right at the very end!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Matthew 5:4
New International Version
4 Blessed are those who mourn,
for they will be comforted.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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"I Mourn'd and I shall mourn with ever-returning spring..."
Walt Whitman
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"I shall hath Mourn'd and I shall mourn... "Forever and ever with each and every...
"Returning- Spring...'
Richard Edward Smrkovsky
Thanks.
