time never was
Looking, waiting, wondering when will it end.3 total reviews
Comment from Stephen Force
Well said, also well illustrated, I've noticed your poetry has gotten a lot more focused. Which I think is a good thing. The idea that time is fleeting and that we change with it for better or worse is a strong message. Well done
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Well said, also well illustrated, I've noticed your poetry has gotten a lot more focused. Which I think is a good thing. The idea that time is fleeting and that we change with it for better or worse is a strong message. Well done
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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thanks steve. you can blame my focus on the lack of focus on our lively hood by those in office. have a great life.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
(bare witness s/b bear; times place s/b time's)
Stunning imagery conveys masterful metaphor of time's merciless march--time never sends it back--follows the night/feeds on the dark. Nice work! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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(bare witness s/b bear; times place s/b time's)
Stunning imagery conveys masterful metaphor of time's merciless march--time never sends it back--follows the night/feeds on the dark. Nice work! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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thank you liz
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such beautiful metaphors you've woven throughout your poem... what a wonderful revelation there in the end! ;) Thanx so much for sharing! ;)
in times place --> in time's place
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Such beautiful metaphors you've woven throughout your poem... what a wonderful revelation there in the end! ;) Thanx so much for sharing! ;)
in times place --> in time's place
Comment Written 14-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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no.thank you
