Bethlehem
A poem about God3 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
CIAO POET: I admire your spiritual acrostic poem. I like the way it tells us how to gain eternal life in the end. You touched on the death as well as the resurrection of our Lord Jesus. You also mentioned His place of birth. You tell us how the blood that He shed on the cross cleanses us from our sins and how it benefits us...His people. You mentioned, "LOVE," Jesus is God...God is, "LOVE." And now abide faith, hope, love, these three, but the greatest of these is, "LOVE," I am grateful to you for sharing this important message. God bless you, dear poet. Ciao cordially: rhonnie69.
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CIAO POET: I admire your spiritual acrostic poem. I like the way it tells us how to gain eternal life in the end. You touched on the death as well as the resurrection of our Lord Jesus. You also mentioned His place of birth. You tell us how the blood that He shed on the cross cleanses us from our sins and how it benefits us...His people. You mentioned, "LOVE," Jesus is God...God is, "LOVE." And now abide faith, hope, love, these three, but the greatest of these is, "LOVE," I am grateful to you for sharing this important message. God bless you, dear poet. Ciao cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
Comment from jaded831
We are put here with choices, your poem inspires us to make the right one. To follow the word of God so we can get to paradise. My faith is strong so your poen was very easy to relate to.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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We are put here with choices, your poem inspires us to make the right one. To follow the word of God so we can get to paradise. My faith is strong so your poen was very easy to relate to.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Glad my words reached you..
I kept it simple and spoke about the life of Jesus?
His birth
His preaching
His death on the cross
Our salvation
Keep save !
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the positive response :
I tried to mention the main moments in the life of Jesus and tried to make it rhyme here and there too ..
Keep safe !
