Comment from ragamuffin

Excellent

Such a peaceful and lovely poem. I think you've definitely covered all the bases. "Stole" seems to be quite the appropriate word for the washing of sin from the cross. "Vast" well expresses the amount of each and every individual's debt. I like the line, "in Christ I hide," as I can identify with wanting to hide away from the ways of this world. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

The picture is beautiful. Your choice of words is great. There are no wasted words. I see nothing to change. The message is great. Good job and good luck in the contest. Good job on the rhyme. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from thee-name

Excellent

Excellent poem. Your enjoyable writing rhymed good to lines.

Cross of Calvary stole away-
All my sins that glorious day,

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.

reply by thee-name on 03-Apr-2015

thank you!

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Nicely written. Until we come to Calvary for the forgiveness of our sins, we don't know what true joy is. We won't know the peace that only Jesus can give us. A peace that passes all understanding. Blessings Patricia

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much Patricia, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

This is a very strong entry for this Easter Acrostic competition, wonderfully spiritual it follows the prompt with excellent rhyming and rhythm, good luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much Eric, for this most wonderful review and comments.

reply by Eric1 on 03-Apr-2015

You are very welcome my friend, and in the lead!

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015

Thank you, you are very gracious,

Comment from Dom G Robles

Excellent

A contest entry. Very timely. I love the rhyme and rhythm, and the picture accompanying. The tone--the message is great a reminder of the Lenten Season.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much Dom, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Good message to remind us of Easter. Cleverly written acrostic, with good use of rhyming. I spotted an error, as it is a contest entry-the rule is i before e except after c, above the title it should read 'Achieved our redemption'. Good luck in the contest. Faye

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much Faye, for this most wonderful review and comments. don't why I did that, e before I.

Comment from Halfree

Good

I know this is a poem and certain uses of grammar are ignored or passed
over in poetry....well sometimes. But "you and me"...Think that is "you and I pass judgement's test." Being picky ...well yes. Otherwise, nice poem.

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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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Comment from livelylinda

Excellent

Author: nicely written acrostic about Good Friday. I realize that Jesus died for all our sins but on Good Friday I still feel sad and my focus is on the inhumane way Jesus was treated, his torture and pain and suffering following all the good works he accomplished. The sadness is brief because he arose from his grave and still influences our lives. Good luck in the contest. livelylinda

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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Thanks so much Linda, for this most wonderful review and comments.

Comment from artemis53

Excellent

Very well done and I hope that it was fun for you. So many know John:3:16. That made me able to understand God the Father as truly a loving Father.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.