Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Quest"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from sibhus
Great thoughts on life and being able to come to trms with it in your own skin. I think the free-verse really allows you to express these thoughts in a much more powerful way. Good piece.
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Great thoughts on life and being able to come to trms with it in your own skin. I think the free-verse really allows you to express these thoughts in a much more powerful way. Good piece.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from adewpearl
Good use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line
good aliteration in lust love and good assonance too
An insightful poem with wise advice about self love and self acceptance
Brooke :-)
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Good use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line
good aliteration in lust love and good assonance too
An insightful poem with wise advice about self love and self acceptance
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from Righteous Riter
The photo compliments the piece well as the words bring the photo to life. Good alliteration with far/from...lust/love...survive/see...lived/life. Good thought provoking message that hold my attention from start to finish.
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The photo compliments the piece well as the words bring the photo to life. Good alliteration with far/from...lust/love...survive/see...lived/life. Good thought provoking message that hold my attention from start to finish.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from Bill Schott
There is a lot said here about sacrifice and pushing the envelope of life. Knowing friends and cherishing the rich nature of that relationship is included in your poem of endurance. I like this one.
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There is a lot said here about sacrifice and pushing the envelope of life. Knowing friends and cherishing the rich nature of that relationship is included in your poem of endurance. I like this one.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from DALLAS01
As I look down the farthest side of my life with age,
Love that line.
We don't get a second time around, to do things differently, so while we are here, it's a good idea to pull out the positives and eliminate the negatives. It is what it is, and was what it was, and hopefully we can extract the good.
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As I look down the farthest side of my life with age,
Love that line.
We don't get a second time around, to do things differently, so while we are here, it's a good idea to pull out the positives and eliminate the negatives. It is what it is, and was what it was, and hopefully we can extract the good.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from Cedar
This is a great poem. You explain life exactly the way it is. There are not many people who can say that they lived their life the way they chose. Bill
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This is a great poem. You explain life exactly the way it is. There are not many people who can say that they lived their life the way they chose. Bill
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from Smoothiecool
your well chosen words and images portray to the reader that your life's journey even with its ups and downs
you are content with what has been lived and learnt along the way
flows well easy read
cheers..Smoothiecool
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your well chosen words and images portray to the reader that your life's journey even with its ups and downs
you are content with what has been lived and learnt along the way
flows well easy read
cheers..Smoothiecool
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from Bryan G
This another nice poem. I like the connection with the sea and the search for inner peace. I enjoyed your lines, "To experience lust, love, anger, tears and pain Only to survive to see another moonlit night alone, Then will you be at peace with yourself And to be able to say, I am my best friend," I like the concept of solitude with satisfaction.
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This another nice poem. I like the connection with the sea and the search for inner peace. I enjoyed your lines, "To experience lust, love, anger, tears and pain Only to survive to see another moonlit night alone, Then will you be at peace with yourself And to be able to say, I am my best friend," I like the concept of solitude with satisfaction.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from Eric1
well Deepwater , we all have a quest in life, something we are searching for, your quest seems to be to create beautiful writing, can I just say that you are succeding'
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well Deepwater , we all have a quest in life, something we are searching for, your quest seems to be to create beautiful writing, can I just say that you are succeding'
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. I do not usually copy and paste....but the below lines sing to my heart...they are so clear and so true.
Only to survive to see another moonlit night alone,
Then will you be at peace with yourself
And to be able to say, I am my best friend,
The poem has such a nice cadence and flows so well, that these lines light up and give me a hope, that one day, one day, i will hold these true in my life...
padumachitta
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Hi. I do not usually copy and paste....but the below lines sing to my heart...they are so clear and so true.
Only to survive to see another moonlit night alone,
Then will you be at peace with yourself
And to be able to say, I am my best friend,
The poem has such a nice cadence and flows so well, that these lines light up and give me a hope, that one day, one day, i will hold these true in my life...
padumachitta
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
