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Mirrors, Reflection or Refractio

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Comment from Janilou
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I'm good
at puzzles

Not so much
with glue...
or you

Snow
comes down
so politely

Covers me
When I just can't

Paint
another portrait



Such vivid word paintings here, I think you have in fact painted that portrait. It's a good poem. The emotion is palpable. I found no errors in your work.
All the best,
Jan

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
    Thank you. I appreciate it.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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The puzzles of our yesterdays seem even more confusing the longer they lie there on the floor --- leave them.. don't try to figure them out... don't try to figure out the other... Bring on the snow - let it wash away the littered rain and the other 'til no glue is necessary. There, now, the snow's gone and it's time to paint a new portrait. :) ;) This is an AWESOME write, Victor, and I'm so glad I ran across it today... gotta say, too, that's a cool pic to accompany it! :) ;) Thanx for sharing, sir! :) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Wonderful review, Yvette. Thank you.
Comment from Ben Colder
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The poet speaks of weariness. Strong wording I fine an the poem holds me for the final. I find no fault and congratulate the writer for a job well done.

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 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thank you, Ben.
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Victor,

Oooh, a very thought provoking piece you have crafted, Victor. It is very well written with nothing for me to suggest improving upon. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)

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 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
    Thank you.