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haiku (virgin sands give birth)

Contest entry (5-7-5)

80 total reviews 
Comment from amahra
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Beautiful art work you've chosen for this writing. Loved the poem; thought it clever, with 'virgin Island gives birth'. Great contest entry.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thank you amahra for the awesome review with excellent stars. I enjoyed writing this one.
    The poles have opened if you so desire to vote.
    God bless1
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully. You paint a lovely portrait and close it out with a solid satori. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Happy you like this little piece Mystic, I thoroughly enjoy reading your work as well.
    Voting is open if you choose to vote.
    God bless!
Comment from Oatmeal
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You did a wonderful job with this challenge. The flow was very nice. The theme was good. The artwork complemented your poem. Your thoughts are well described.

There was nothing wrong that I could tell.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thank you Oatmeal for another excellent review and generous stars. I appreciate and look forward to your feedback.
    The voting has started if you choose to vote.
    God Bless!
Comment from Ninap2
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Excellent, excellent haiku. Wow. I simply could not resist reviewing this one. sands giving birth to islands and to top it off trespassing is allowed. Your picture is perfect. -Nina

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thank you Nina for this wonderfully invigorating review and generous stars. I had a great time designing this piece.
    The voting poles are open if you choose to vote.
    God Bless!
Comment from acerisestory
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This is a well written haiku, mystery poet. I very much like the personification you've used in "virgin sands give birth to small island sprouting life."

Your satori is a surprise and well done.

This is a good contest entry. Good luck. Alana

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thank you Alana for the awesome review.
    The poles are open for voting if you choose to do so.
    God Bless!
Comment from zanya
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Isn't Mother Nature simply wonderful in her bounty and gifts to us here on this planet as powerfully portrayed in this interesting Haiku

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Yes she is Zanya, I love every aspect of nature, even the unpleasant parts.
    The poles are open if you choose to vote.
    God Bless!
Comment from boxergirl
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Great job with your 5/7/5 poem about an island. Virgin sand gives birth is a great line and trespassing allowed works well for me also. Picture compliments as well. Best of luck in the contest! 8-)

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thank you for the all inspiring feedback and great review you have delivered.
    The poles have opened if you choose to vote.
    God bless!
Comment from Jackarrie
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I like this Haiku, it is very true how much life is on these virgin islands.

I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Mary

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thank you Mary for another awesome review and generous stars.
    The poles have opened if you choose to vote.
    God bless!
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
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This has the feel of the birth of an island, right at the very beginning. No wonder trespassing is allowed in this uninhabited state. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thank you Jeanie for another inspiring review and generous star count.
    The poles have opened if you choose to vote.
    God Bless!
Comment from c_lucas
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Very strong first line. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Excellent imagery. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
    Thank you Lucas for the awesome review. God Bless!
reply by c_lucas on 26-Oct-2014
    You're welcome.