Comment from Queenise

Excellent

Bob,you are so wrong for that friend. I laughed so hard when that ending came. I was hoping it was not a predictable one and boy was I glad that it wasn't. Love it. He probably was going to share that sandwich. Would recommend. Good luck. Queenise

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010

Thanks Queenise. I am glad I "got" you. LOL...I couldn't use anymore words...fifty was the limit...Bob

reply by Queenise on 06-Jan-2010

You're welcome,Bob. Queenise

Comment from StevenJosephBruening

Excellent

Great economy of words and the set up to this flash fiction allows for such a plethora of musings on what happens afterwards... a perfect use of words to set a tense situtation, introduce the character, the action, and the climax with the possibility of a greater climax to come. Bravo!

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010

Thanks, Steve. I appreciate your review and comments...Bob

reply by StevenJosephBruening on 06-Jan-2010

My pleasure.
~ Steven

Comment from medicnate

Excellent

Hahahahaaha, That is so funny. Great build up to a surprise end. Never saw that one coming. As a horror writer, I was hoping he'd lop someone's head off, or his own hand, ha. Nice work and good luck with the contest.

~medicnate~

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010

Good, Nate...If yoou liked it, I am happy being that you are the master of this genre currently...LOL...Bob

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Oh, this was good. You are extremely talented to be able to write only fifty words and make sense out of something. I am truly impressed. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010

Thanks so much, Barbara. I am so lucky to have you as a fan...Bob

Comment from dlewis

Excellent

Mastery... The Voracious One is Excellent.
Sounds like a part in a scary movie reaching into his glove - box pulling a pocket knife perhaps...way to go.
dlewis

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010

Thanks, Donna...I appreciate your review...Bob

Comment from Soulester

Excellent

Good one, Mastery. Always the humorous surprise ending. Your story is a hoot. I think there's a name for these super short stories. Super flash? Flash flash? Whatever, this looks like a fun contest, and yours is is fun entry. Good luck in the voting booth. Mary

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010

Thanks so much, Mary...:) Bob

Comment from Belinda

Excellent

So... Del's blood rush to his head, his eyes resembles marbles, cause he's hungry? And he usd the knife to share the Italian sub with you? I got fooled again, poor me! Anyway, excellent entry.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010

Thanks so much, Belinda...I appreciate your support ...always...Bob

Comment from Walter L. Jones

Excellent

I spent the six, so a five in reality, a masters gift, and time measures not much more than perfection, "A" in a class of your own, time changes nothing but the pages on the years... best night you can find.. Walt

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010

Thanks so much, Walt...Long Time no hear from...Bob (I know, I am guilty also...LOL..

Comment from CALLAHANMR

Excellent

Hi Bob:)
A most creative short work. I certainly didn't expect the exquisite twist at the end.

Thank you for sharing your contest entry. Good Luck!

Roger

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010

Thanks, Roger I appreciate that...Bob

Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

Ha! Ha! He must have had a very low sugar count.
Excellent description.
I really liked the scene, and the words meshed together very nicely.
Thanks for posting, and good luck in the contest.
Michael

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010

Thanks so much, Mike...Bob