I love you...
Birthday girl..93 total reviews
Comment from krys123
Roy;
An extremely exceptional piece of poetry that I enjoyed reading very much in which was so inspirational and enlightening throughout the writing.
Beautiful tempo and meter throughout the rhythm and a rhyming that was neither forced nor labored and helped with the rhythmic flow.
The imagery was very clear and distinct and overall very descriptive and exquisitely expressive throughout the writing. This is what made it so inspirational and enlightening was how you love extended itself to the love of Christ and that love channeled through you to your lovely wife.
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem for everyone to read and may the good Lord be with you always Roy.
Alex
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
Roy;
An extremely exceptional piece of poetry that I enjoyed reading very much in which was so inspirational and enlightening throughout the writing.
Beautiful tempo and meter throughout the rhythm and a rhyming that was neither forced nor labored and helped with the rhythmic flow.
The imagery was very clear and distinct and overall very descriptive and exquisitely expressive throughout the writing. This is what made it so inspirational and enlightening was how you love extended itself to the love of Christ and that love channeled through you to your lovely wife.
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem for everyone to read and may the good Lord be with you always Roy.
Alex
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thank you Alex for this amazing review, the beautiful comments and the tribute in the stars, much appreciated my friend, blessings, Roy.
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What can I say why you just a darn good writer.
And you are so indeed welcome.
Alex
Comment from tdragonfly
How sweet that you found your true love and best friend to share a life time of memories with. Her smile says it all.
Thank you for sharing her with us on this a special day.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
How sweet that you found your true love and best friend to share a life time of memories with. Her smile says it all.
Thank you for sharing her with us on this a special day.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review and comments, Blessings, Roy.
Comment from DR DIP
What a wonderful tribute to your wife and maker Roy. How long does it take you to write your rhymes?
I find rhyming verse flows easily and can be written quite quickly the only thing is people always say my rhyme seemed forced..HELLO its rhyme..but no one forced me!! lol
you definitely have to put together a book of gospel poems it would self very well amongst the congregations of the religious communities for sure
well done as usual
dip
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
What a wonderful tribute to your wife and maker Roy. How long does it take you to write your rhymes?
I find rhyming verse flows easily and can be written quite quickly the only thing is people always say my rhyme seemed forced..HELLO its rhyme..but no one forced me!! lol
you definitely have to put together a book of gospel poems it would self very well amongst the congregations of the religious communities for sure
well done as usual
dip
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Thanks Dip, for your great review, it's sometimes hard, the more you do it the easier it gets, changing the end word without interfering with the integrity of the poem is sometimes what I do, you find another word that fits, lovely stars, thanks my friend, blessings, Roy.
Comment from bob cullen
A truly beautiful expression of love for one's wife.
Obviously Roy we share more than a love of writing, we won the lottery when it came to finding our life-long companion.
I bet your scored top marks when you showed her this.
The poem also says something about you. You are indeed a gentleman of the highest calibre
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
A truly beautiful expression of love for one's wife.
Obviously Roy we share more than a love of writing, we won the lottery when it came to finding our life-long companion.
I bet your scored top marks when you showed her this.
The poem also says something about you. You are indeed a gentleman of the highest calibre
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Thank you Bob, quite often the people in our lives inspire us to be better than we are, I have the best wife who has stuck with me through thick and thin, a very close and faithful friend, who believed in me when I didn't, and the best, loving daughters who I adore, God has been good to me, when I didn't deserve It, I'm a lucky man! It sounds you are also, wonderful Review, thank you my friend, blessings, Roy.
Comment from JaySee
What a beautiful tribute to your wife Roy! I loved the poem. The third stanza is my favorite, especially the lines "tasting hunger's hollows/yet standing in light's beams." Those lines highlight the highs and lows that are certainly present in life. And, it is truly wonderful to have a loving, Godly companion in those times of high and lows! I hope your wife has read this poem, and appreciates and loves it, as much as you so obviously appreciate and love her. Great work!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
What a beautiful tribute to your wife Roy! I loved the poem. The third stanza is my favorite, especially the lines "tasting hunger's hollows/yet standing in light's beams." Those lines highlight the highs and lows that are certainly present in life. And, it is truly wonderful to have a loving, Godly companion in those times of high and lows! I hope your wife has read this poem, and appreciates and loves it, as much as you so obviously appreciate and love her. Great work!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Thank you, dear friend, for you're inspiring and kindly review, I really am the lucky one, and I'm grateful to The Lord, who gave me these blessings, undeserving though I am, people who don't know His goodness are so unfortunate and blind! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from kwyattman
Well written. Beautiful lines. But, the thing that I like the most is the tribute to a lasting marriage covenant and the kind words to your life partner. I know God smiles at this kind of faithfulness.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
Well written. Beautiful lines. But, the thing that I like the most is the tribute to a lasting marriage covenant and the kind words to your life partner. I know God smiles at this kind of faithfulness.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for this inspiring review, comments and stars, you have made my day and I'm grateful, bless you, Roy.
Comment from amada
Great work to honor your wife. She seems as a very kind and happy lady, congratulations in a happy marriage and happy birthday. Great to meet her.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
Great work to honor your wife. She seems as a very kind and happy lady, congratulations in a happy marriage and happy birthday. Great to meet her.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Thank you for this kind and encouraging review, I appreciate it, blessings, Roy.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'I love you' is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. This talented poet's wife is blessed to have such a loving husband. It was a pleasure to read and review a work of this standard.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
'I love you' is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. This talented poet's wife is blessed to have such a loving husband. It was a pleasure to read and review a work of this standard.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Thank you for this most uplifting review and excellent rating andthevgreat support you show me, blessings, Roy,
Roy, you're more than welcome.
Blessings to you too, the Duchess
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Roy what an awesome family you have , a blessing
from God. I like the union with Gods son. His light shines in her eyes and she is beautiful. Nice gift for your precious sweetheart. Happy Birthday!
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
Roy what an awesome family you have , a blessing
from God. I like the union with Gods son. His light shines in her eyes and she is beautiful. Nice gift for your precious sweetheart. Happy Birthday!
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for this gracious review, and the beautiful encouragement, blessings, Roy,
Comment from CALLAHANMR
What a great tribute to a beautiful lady. I would like to join you in wishing her a happy birthday. Love shines from her face. You are so fortunate to have each other.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
What a great tribute to a beautiful lady. I would like to join you in wishing her a happy birthday. Love shines from her face. You are so fortunate to have each other.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for this lovely review and encouragement, blessings, Roy.