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Writings From the Heart

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A book of Poetry & Writing

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Comment from Raul GF
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This is one of the best dedications I've seen, so original and unique it kinds of makes us realize an incredible truth because some of the greatest truths and wisdom would never be written but that is just what makes it so great.

 Comment Written 03-May-2010


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Comment from Jeanie Mercer
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I like the fresh thought that not all important things are passed along only by the written (or chiseled) word, but also by something less substantial, like the spoken word or perhaps the spirit.

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Comment from minopavlic
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That's why I read my bible, everything you need is in there, but why would I trust my eternal security to a preacher, who may have not read the book himself, therefore leading me down the road of deception....

no_obstacle

 Comment Written 03-May-2010


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    thanks for reading
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    your welcome
Comment from Alexander E Poet
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I thought the poem was a wonderful piece of work, I thought deeply profound desirable. I like the imagery, which complemented your poetry extremely well. Well done no errors of mistakes. Alexander

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    thank you Alexander for reading
Comment from Dustman6180
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Good question, GW. If they do pass it on it will most likely be written in a shortened text message format: SA (Samuel Adams) and TJ (Thomas Jefferson) were BFFL. They both signed the DIP (Declaration of Independence) LOL Thanks for the thought provoking post.

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Comment from Judith Ann
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That is a good question and one we need to be asking. Your words are one good reason to be sitting at my computer each day; making sure that nothing important goes unwritten. Well put. -Judy

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Comment from bayoupoet
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You have spoken volumes in such a short writing. With so many one parent homes and the disinterest of the male role model I wonder this too! This is very profound and thought provoking!
sandra

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Comment from hotstuff
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I love this poem. For me, the poem speaks from the heart about the importance of communicating to our youngsters in a way that will make them recognise the value in something that is worth preserving and passing on to their own kids.
You are right, not everything is written down and so much is lost because of it. Folklore is so important.

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Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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'To all unwritten things' is an excellent piece of poetry. Who though is in the position to answer this talented writer's rhetorical question? It was a privilege to both read and review a work of this standard.

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    You're welcome.
Comment from harleyangelbrat
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This is a very deep thought put into poetry. It is well written and has a nice flow. I enjoyed reading it very much. Excellent read, God bless you!

 Comment Written 03-May-2010


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reply by harleyangelbrat on 03-May-2010
    You are very welcome. Have a blessed day and a blessed week, as well. Marilyn