A Poem To My Dead Sister
Writing the pain away41 total reviews
Comment from jusylee72
I love this. The whole premise of seeing a dead love one as they might be now. I too would treasure that moment. I think you do an excellent job of going further into that thought. You don't pretend your sister was perfect, You have your own private jokes. Our secrets , especially from our mother. So many lovely moments in this sad but wonderful poem.
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2016
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I love this. The whole premise of seeing a dead love one as they might be now. I too would treasure that moment. I think you do an excellent job of going further into that thought. You don't pretend your sister was perfect, You have your own private jokes. Our secrets , especially from our mother. So many lovely moments in this sad but wonderful poem.
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2016
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Thank you so much. I'm so glad you saw my heart in this. But I didn't really mean for it to be sad, just emptying out my heart.