Memory's Touch
Tetractys: Contest Entry56 total reviews
Comment from sgalletti
It is so nice to see a new write by you coming through on my PM. Where have you been? This is a beautiful tetractys poem and reeks of love in just a few words. Best of luck in the contest. Sue
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It is so nice to see a new write by you coming through on my PM. Where have you been? This is a beautiful tetractys poem and reeks of love in just a few words. Best of luck in the contest. Sue
Comment Written 05-Nov-2009
Comment from amada
This is a very emotive and at the same time artistic work. The beginning are short and powerful words that induce the reader to continue absorbing what comes next.
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This is a very emotive and at the same time artistic work. The beginning are short and powerful words that induce the reader to continue absorbing what comes next.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2009
Comment from Shirley B
Your poem is so sweet and true. Death will never be able to take away memories. The imagery is beautiful. This is a very powerful poem for the contest. Good luck. Shirley
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Your poem is so sweet and true. Death will never be able to take away memories. The imagery is beautiful. This is a very powerful poem for the contest. Good luck. Shirley
Comment Written 05-Nov-2009
Comment from blondiedots
This is an excellent Tetractys. So powerful in the economy of words! Beautifully written and displayed. A poem which will stick with me as a meaningful quote- in your name! Bravo and Blessings
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This is an excellent Tetractys. So powerful in the economy of words! Beautifully written and displayed. A poem which will stick with me as a meaningful quote- in your name! Bravo and Blessings
Comment Written 05-Nov-2009
Comment from eraserlynch
Awesome! I loved this poem and the way it was presented too. Wonderful feelings evoked as I read through this lovely short love poem. Best of luck in the contest.
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Awesome! I loved this poem and the way it was presented too. Wonderful feelings evoked as I read through this lovely short love poem. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2009
Comment from mountainwriter49
This is a very meaningful and beautiful poem. I have only one small suggestion and that is to end the last line with a period. I only suggest the period because you used a colon in line 3. Good luck with your contest! Thanks for sharing your poem. M
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This is a very meaningful and beautiful poem. I have only one small suggestion and that is to end the last line with a period. I only suggest the period because you used a colon in line 3. Good luck with your contest! Thanks for sharing your poem. M
Comment Written 05-Nov-2009
Comment from D. Longo
Of course, dear Friend, you return in style. Fifteen words, and I'm off to memory lane. Powerful writing that evokes emotion filled retrospect. Wow!
Be well, Diane!
Dante
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2009
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Of course, dear Friend, you return in style. Fifteen words, and I'm off to memory lane. Powerful writing that evokes emotion filled retrospect. Wow!
Be well, Diane!
Dante
Comment Written 05-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2009
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Oh Dante!
Thirteen revisions - driving to and from school - in my mind - in the dark - amazing how it started and how it finally ended...always the greatest fear that the offering will appear trite or maudlin...How welcomed is your visit and review!
Blessings to you, dear friend!
diane
Comment from leachwriter
Excellent entry. Stays within guidelines. Reads smoothly without error. Theme is maintained and what a great and most touching message. Good job,
regards
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Excellent entry. Stays within guidelines. Reads smoothly without error. Theme is maintained and what a great and most touching message. Good job,
regards
Comment Written 05-Nov-2009
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Mrs. KT ....
This is well written and attractively presented and there is nothing to suggest changing.
As it is a Contest entry, I wish you well and thank you for sharing these thoughts with us.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
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Hullo Mrs. KT ....
This is well written and attractively presented and there is nothing to suggest changing.
As it is a Contest entry, I wish you well and thank you for sharing these thoughts with us.
With love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2009
Comment from Charlene0513
To Mrs. KT,
In just a few short words you have said a lot as I reminisce about a mind that still dwells on the memory of a loved one-----a long, long time after they have moved on.
Great adaptation!
Charlene
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2009
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To Mrs. KT,
In just a few short words you have said a lot as I reminisce about a mind that still dwells on the memory of a loved one-----a long, long time after they have moved on.
Great adaptation!
Charlene
Comment Written 05-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2009
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Hello Charlene! So very pleased you enjoyed! thank you! diane
