The Secret
20 Syllables entry40 total reviews
Comment from SS. Anjum
Very well said....its a sweet poetry with accurate syllable count......a romantic message with a little humor in it, i like the combination of poem ....good work..all the best for the contest...keep sharing!
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Very well said....its a sweet poetry with accurate syllable count......a romantic message with a little humor in it, i like the combination of poem ....good work..all the best for the contest...keep sharing!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"The Secret", is a short, well-written and entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck in the contest!
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"The Secret", is a short, well-written and entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is a fun write and I laughed when I saw the picture and laughed even louder when I saw your poem, age is no barrier for these feelings, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Ha ha ha, this is a fun write and I laughed when I saw the picture and laughed even louder when I saw your poem, age is no barrier for these feelings, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Wonderful job with this short, 20 syllable writing prompt. The cute picture brought a whole new meaning to your words and made me laugh. Great little poem - thank you for sharing.
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Wonderful job with this short, 20 syllable writing prompt. The cute picture brought a whole new meaning to your words and made me laugh. Great little poem - thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from lyenochka
Well, that's a funny picture and I guess that couple keep their flame going with "holding tight" to one another. The syllable count is perfect and humor is enjoyable. Best wishes in the contest!
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Well, that's a funny picture and I guess that couple keep their flame going with "holding tight" to one another. The syllable count is perfect and humor is enjoyable. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Well, well. I guess that perhaps he's still in the saddle. He is literally holding on tight. If that were my mother, I wouldn't want to see or know about this. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!
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Well, well. I guess that perhaps he's still in the saddle. He is literally holding on tight. If that were my mother, I wouldn't want to see or know about this. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Clever twist re hold on tight--amusing photo--did you take it for this contest or vice versa? Best of luck. Cheers. LIZ (if this is your marriage--congrats)
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Clever twist re hold on tight--amusing photo--did you take it for this contest or vice versa? Best of luck. Cheers. LIZ (if this is your marriage--congrats)
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
Comment from Earl Corp
That's a cute picture you chose to accompany you entry in the 20 syllables contest. I'm not sure, but I only counted 19 syllables, but I could be wrong. If I am all you have to do is change What's to what is. Good luck in the contest.
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That's a cute picture you chose to accompany you entry in the 20 syllables contest. I'm not sure, but I only counted 19 syllables, but I could be wrong. If I am all you have to do is change What's to what is. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
Hilarious!!! This is a fantasticly funny entry. You penned a very clever and creative poem here and the picture accompanying this poem is absolutely perfect. Best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful night.
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Hilarious!!! This is a fantasticly funny entry. You penned a very clever and creative poem here and the picture accompanying this poem is absolutely perfect. Best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful night.
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
Comment from Gloria ....
What a terrific entry into this contest, and the photograph illustrates the dancing part of the successful wedded bliss.
Excellent entry into this contest and I wish you great luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
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What a terrific entry into this contest, and the photograph illustrates the dancing part of the successful wedded bliss.
Excellent entry into this contest and I wish you great luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2020
