Wisdom Comes in the Rain
Jesus is with us always.40 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written uplifting and encouraging poem about the storms of life that can sometimes get us discouraged and disappointed, but when we stand in the pouring rain, better days will come, we just need to keep our faith strong.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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A very well-written uplifting and encouraging poem about the storms of life that can sometimes get us discouraged and disappointed, but when we stand in the pouring rain, better days will come, we just need to keep our faith strong.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Yes ma'am. You get it. That makes me happy. Thank you for the review!
Blessings,
Tina
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Yes ma'am. You get it. That makes me happy. Thank you for the review!
Blessings,
Tina
Comment from Heather Knight
I love your poem: both the way it's written and the content.
It's true, we all have our storms and it's good to know the Lord will comfort us.
Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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I love your poem: both the way it's written and the content.
It's true, we all have our storms and it's good to know the Lord will comfort us.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thank you for reading my poem. I appreciate the review and stars!
Have a great day!
Tina
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Thank you for reading my poem. I appreciate the review and stars!
Have a great day!
Tina
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"So Let the Rains Come", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me this is certainly a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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"So Let the Rains Come", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me this is certainly a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much fort this review. I'm so glad you liked it!! A nice thing to wake up to:)
Blessings,
Tina
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Thank you so much fort this review. I'm so glad you liked it!! A nice thing to wake up to:)
Blessings,
Tina
Tina,as always, you're more than welcome.
Take care and God bless,
the Duchess :))) :)))
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
Trust is everything in this life, and you described your ongoing leap of faith beautifully in this descriptive, heartfelt poem. Very nicely done, Tina.
In the third line, the one that begins "Though troubles come," should the word 'his' be capitalized?
Also -and forgive me if my being Jewish makes me not sure if this was intentional and symbolic of Jesus- did you mean to say "Sonshine" or is it a typo for sunshine? Like I said, I'm so sorry to appear dense!!
xo
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Trust is everything in this life, and you described your ongoing leap of faith beautifully in this descriptive, heartfelt poem. Very nicely done, Tina.
In the third line, the one that begins "Though troubles come," should the word 'his' be capitalized?
Also -and forgive me if my being Jewish makes me not sure if this was intentional and symbolic of Jesus- did you mean to say "Sonshine" or is it a typo for sunshine? Like I said, I'm so sorry to appear dense!!
xo
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thanks for your kind review! I meant Sonshine...play on words. I may change that to "Son-shine"...meaning Jesus. You aren't dense:) That's cool you are Jewish. Much respect to you on behalf of Jewish friends I had in high school. Sweetest people ever:)
I will check on his. Yes, should be capitalized. I need to not type on my phone...I make typos!
Thanks for your input!
Blessings,
Tina
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Thanks for your kind review! I meant Sonshine...play on words. I may change that to "Son-shine"...meaning Jesus. You aren't dense:) That's cool you are Jewish. Much respect to you on behalf of Jewish friends I had in high school. Sweetest people ever:)
I will check on his. Yes, should be capitalized. I need to not type on my phone...I make typos!
Thanks for your input!
Blessings,
Tina
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful message, Tina! I especially love that last stanza. The prior stanzas are great, too, as there is a strong message about trusting God through the storms of life but the last stanza goes beyond and sees the "golden thoughts" of "His wisdom" and the assurance of God's loving us as His own through the storm. That is truly beautiful!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Beautiful message, Tina! I especially love that last stanza. The prior stanzas are great, too, as there is a strong message about trusting God through the storms of life but the last stanza goes beyond and sees the "golden thoughts" of "His wisdom" and the assurance of God's loving us as His own through the storm. That is truly beautiful!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much for reviewing and especially telling me what part you liked best. That will help me in the future! I appreciate you, friend!
Tina
Comment from Carla Trinklein
Another beautiful offering, with an important message. I especially enjoyed the lines "God will speak in the storms if I just listen, I will hear thoughts higher than my own." So often we think we don't want to hear those thoughts, but the heart ache we'd be spared if we only paid attention. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Another beautiful offering, with an important message. I especially enjoyed the lines "God will speak in the storms if I just listen, I will hear thoughts higher than my own." So often we think we don't want to hear those thoughts, but the heart ache we'd be spared if we only paid attention. Nicely done!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Aw, thank you so much! Im glad you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to review my poem :-)
Tina
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Aw, thank you so much! Im glad you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to review my poem :-)
Tina
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Aw, thank you so much! Im glad you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to review my poem :-)
Tina
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You never feel frustrated or scared at the rains or storms; you know God is there to help enjoying each rough period of trial in your life; God keeps plans for you, let rain or storm come; He keeps you happy; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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You never feel frustrated or scared at the rains or storms; you know God is there to help enjoying each rough period of trial in your life; God keeps plans for you, let rain or storm come; He keeps you happy; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much friend! You totally got this poem! I appreciate the review :-)
Tina
Comment from Sally Law
This is a lovely poem of your faith, dear Tina. I see you fixed the little typo. A sweet poem of strong faith. I love how you spelled Sonshine. The light that never goes out.
All my best,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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This is a lovely poem of your faith, dear Tina. I see you fixed the little typo. A sweet poem of strong faith. I love how you spelled Sonshine. The light that never goes out.
All my best,
Sal xo
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thank you! I will check that right now :-)
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You fixed it, looks great. I updated my comments. Xo
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Oh thank you for updating.
That was so nice of you!
We are human, lol.
I'm sure it won't be my
last mistake;)
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I get them all the time. BTW, I miss your reviews. I have an article and poem up right now. Hope you can stop by!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh such a beautiful song from the heart of a beautiful poet!! Don't ever lose your join, Beautiful Lady --- if you feel the sunshine waning, let me know and I'll send some your way!! :) Thank you for the rainy smile, Lady T, I certainly could use it today!! ;) ;) Yvette
Be sure to pop back in there and, in the chorus, fix this line: "So let theBridgMs pour!"
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Oh such a beautiful song from the heart of a beautiful poet!! Don't ever lose your join, Beautiful Lady --- if you feel the sunshine waning, let me know and I'll send some your way!! :) Thank you for the rainy smile, Lady T, I certainly could use it today!! ;) ;) Yvette
Be sure to pop back in there and, in the chorus, fix this line: "So let theBridgMs pour!"
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Oh my goodness! I will fix that right now thank you! I'm so glad you liked it and I like how you said the raining smile :-)
Comment from KyColonel Randal
As I write this review, it is raining cats and dogs outside--the perfect ambiance. The illustration you have chosen is a perfect compliment to your poem, and the background and font colors are well-chosen as well. Your author's notes add to the readers' understanding. Thank you for sharing this poem.
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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As I write this review, it is raining cats and dogs outside--the perfect ambiance. The illustration you have chosen is a perfect compliment to your poem, and the background and font colors are well-chosen as well. Your author's notes add to the readers' understanding. Thank you for sharing this poem.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the review, and sorry its raining where you are!
I appreciate Kate you taking the time to read this.
Have a great evening, despite the rain:)
Tina
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Thank you for the review, and sorry its raining where you are!
I appreciate Kate you taking the time to read this.
Have a great evening, despite the rain:)
Tina
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Thank you for the review, and sorry its raining where you are!
I appreciate Kate you taking the time to read this.
Have a great evening, despite the rain:)
Tina
