Homegrown Flowers
Tanka 5/7/5/7/749 total reviews
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Moonchild. Until now, I had no idea that rasmine was into the art side of things. I just recently saw some of her writing. Small world.
Anyway, how generous of you to invite people to pick your flowers.
"scented love, hope, peace
souls seeking harmony ~"
Wonderful images. Blessings, my friend Bob
Hi, Moonchild. Until now, I had no idea that rasmine was into the art side of things. I just recently saw some of her writing. Small world.
Anyway, how generous of you to invite people to pick your flowers.
"scented love, hope, peace
souls seeking harmony ~"
Wonderful images. Blessings, my friend Bob
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from mermaids
I like the line "scented love, hope, peace". The image of the flowers as these emotions adds to the strength of your poem. There is a happy feeling in your poem.
I like the line "scented love, hope, peace". The image of the flowers as these emotions adds to the strength of your poem. There is a happy feeling in your poem.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles Luna,
the way I read your tanka poem you pickled the most beautiful array of flowers from your home grown garden placed them in a fancy vase to someone special.
Gert
Smiles Luna,
the way I read your tanka poem you pickled the most beautiful array of flowers from your home grown garden placed them in a fancy vase to someone special.
Gert
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This reminds me of the day I came home to find my flower garden in the front of my house had been ravaged. I was upset till I found someone thought they were good enough for a bouquet to put on a casket. I felt honored
This reminds me of the day I came home to find my flower garden in the front of my house had been ravaged. I was upset till I found someone thought they were good enough for a bouquet to put on a casket. I felt honored
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from nancyrabbrose
Another lovely tribute to Mickey. You chose a great illustration and your poetic words enhance the whole display. Your flowers that you paint with your words give life to all of us. Well done.
Another lovely tribute to Mickey. You chose a great illustration and your poetic words enhance the whole display. Your flowers that you paint with your words give life to all of us. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Absolutely beautiful Tanka poem, you have portrayed the the picture of flowers from bed to vase wonderfully well and such a lovely picture to compliment your words.
Thanks for sharing
Absolutely beautiful Tanka poem, you have portrayed the the picture of flowers from bed to vase wonderfully well and such a lovely picture to compliment your words.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest well.
A well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest well.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from ProSongwriter
Hi Jeni,
I wouldn't know a Tanka from a mushroom. But I know I like this! The warmth and gentle message of your words is soothing and a pleasure to read. very well done, my friend!
wishing you everything good!
Alan
Hi Jeni,
I wouldn't know a Tanka from a mushroom. But I know I like this! The warmth and gentle message of your words is soothing and a pleasure to read. very well done, my friend!
wishing you everything good!
Alan
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
scented love, hope, peace
souls seeking harmony ~
Join~ pick some of our beauty
What a beautiful write for the comp, Luna, this is superb, i particularly liked the above lines, gave me tingles, you do that often with your work! well done love meia xx
scented love, hope, peace
souls seeking harmony ~
Join~ pick some of our beauty
What a beautiful write for the comp, Luna, this is superb, i particularly liked the above lines, gave me tingles, you do that often with your work! well done love meia xx
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
Comment from Zue65
You followed strictly the rules for writing a Tanka and you executed it well here. The message is spot on. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.
You followed strictly the rules for writing a Tanka and you executed it well here. The message is spot on. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017