Comment from Andrewajgblue

Excellent

I thought this was a beautiful poem and the presentation of it was amazing, the colours and the picture compliment the poem perfectly, giving a sense of peace and tranquilly, the wording was do lovely, thanks for sharing ,
Andrew

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014

Thank you Andrew for your kind review:)

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

This is a beautiful free verse spiritual poem, I am not surprised that it is all time best.

There is no doubt that we find spirituality in the beauty of the plants, flowers, birds. and yes the beautiful butterflies.

Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014

Thank you so much Mary:)

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

"I am with you always." This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014

THank you Charlie:)

Comment from Kenneth Schaal

Excellent

A passionate appeal to know your Lord, in good poetic format. You are looking in the quiet places, a good place to start, I feel. Kenny

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014

Thanks Kenny:)

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

I love the tone and flow of this spiritual invocation
to the Lord. Imbued with a anticipating serenity of
connection through these significant sounds that
alight as a soft and gentle whisper; awaiting further
guidance of sound and inspiration. Artwork chosen
enhances the spiritual 'glow' symbolism perfectly.
Thanks for sharing, very intriguing presentation.
Best wishes always, Ronni

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014

Thank you much Ronni:)

Comment from rjpurdy

Excellent

A lovely free verse Teresa. Your expression of faith and commitment to God is powerful Your stanzas are smooth, each with it's own praise and meaning. An enjoyable read.

~Peace & Grace~ Rod

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014

Thank you Rod:)

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Well done free verse. you appear to have a love for the Lord.
Effective use of repeated lines.
Gaod speaks to us in different ways . Sometimes he sends someone to give us good advice but we musst have an open mind. He says let those who have ears to hear -hear and those who have eyes to see --see

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014

Yes, I agree with you words and thanks for the great review:)

Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

Great spiritual free verse poem. He speaks to us in many different ways. Sometimes it is just a whisper. The main thing is that we take time to listen.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014

Learning to listen to God is so important and I think so few people know how to do it. Thanks for the great review:)

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

God speaks to us through all his creation and his wonderful world. This poem reminds us to be mindful of the still small voice.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014

Thank you very much:)

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

I think you know that I am not one of those who is considered a believer in the biblical sense. But I always enjoy reading how other people,for a lack of a better word, Spiritalize. Especially when done in such a moving fashion as you have presented. Great job I enjoyed your words of wisdom..
TK

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014

TK I appreciate that you have an open mind to spiritual poems. Thanks for the great review my friend:)