Saving Jill
A quatrain poem about saving a life.34 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
strong use of rhyming couplets in your quatrain poem
intense expression of soulful emotion
good assonance in no hope
and in broken/grown
strong emotional appeal with a message that I'm sure many readers can relate to
Brooke
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
strong use of rhyming couplets in your quatrain poem
intense expression of soulful emotion
good assonance in no hope
and in broken/grown
strong emotional appeal with a message that I'm sure many readers can relate to
Brooke
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Well I can tell you for a fact, a lot of people on FS have already told me how much they can relate to this piece, so I couldn't agree with you more on that front!! ;) Thanks for the review!! Much appreciated!!!
Comment from crzypnter
I think you did a wonderful job of explaining the daily issues of mental illness, The struggle within to continue or not. To be brave enough to conquer something that most do not have even have a clue because of the false face that has to be put on in society so your not labeled. Once that happens you will always have that label follow you. Really like the last stanza. August
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
I think you did a wonderful job of explaining the daily issues of mental illness, The struggle within to continue or not. To be brave enough to conquer something that most do not have even have a clue because of the false face that has to be put on in society so your not labeled. Once that happens you will always have that label follow you. Really like the last stanza. August
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you!!! This means ALOT!!!!! <3
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Any time I am glad that your saving yourself ever need someone to talk to you know where im at August :)<3
Comment from gypsymoth
That's the most important thing to realize one can be
saved only if they want to save themself. You summed it up well. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsymoth
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
That's the most important thing to realize one can be
saved only if they want to save themself. You summed it up well. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsymoth
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thanks!! Much appreciated!!
Comment from patcelaw
Jill this is a beautiful poem in a sad way, but spells out how much alike our lives have been. I just think we were meant to meet here Blessing my dear friend, blessings. Patricia
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
Jill this is a beautiful poem in a sad way, but spells out how much alike our lives have been. I just think we were meant to meet here Blessing my dear friend, blessings. Patricia
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thanks Pat!! That's exactly what my gut told me too!! ;) <3 Jill