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These words I write

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Comment from Boogienights
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This is a beautiful prayer poem and I envy you your deep faith. I do pray, but sometimes wonder if I'm heard. This is a testimony to your enduring faith, thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much, for these terrific comments and review blessings Roy
Comment from Anne Johnston
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What beautiful prayer you have written, Roy.
"Lord, may the words my pen would write,
be as a stream of grace and light.
And may the spirit of my soul,
reflect the source that make men whole."
The Lord has given us the gift to write and our prayer is that each word will be a blessing to those who read.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Anne, for these terrific comments and a wonderful review blessings Roy
reply by Anne Johnston on 08-Oct-2021
    You are welcome, Roy
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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What a beautiful prayer, Roy. You have made it even more powerful by fitting it into a poetic format. I admire your constant gratitude and faith and hope in God.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Theodore, for these fantastic comments and super review blessings Roy
Comment from Hitcher
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I'm guessing from your poem that God came to you in your hour of need. Someone you loved had died and you had fallen into darkness, been swallowed whole by it. His light, love and beauty pulled you back from the brink and you were born again so to speak Roy ?
To know without doubt, without question that He is the truth, the way, the answer... few can say that I believe my friend. You are a very lucky man : ))

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
    Thanks, He pulled me back from the brink. And thanks so much for these magnificent comments and review and stars, I am grateful dear friend blessings Roy
Comment from scongrove
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Outstanding writing, my friend! :)
Wow... I absolutely love this one. You really poured your heart into this. The last part is my favorite. It brings back memories for me when I was saved.
He saved me from death's dark despair,
replaced it with His grace and care.
He gave me hope when all seemed lost,
from death by faith, life's stream I've crossed.

Thank you for sharing.
Always your fan,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
    Thanks dear Shana, you are a fount of encouragement and grace
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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Such grace and holy touch. I love your work, it is infused with the love and peace of the Holy Spirit that I think flows through your hands as you write. May He keep you safe for us that we may enjoy and profit from you wisdom.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Sherry, for these terrific comments and review blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Lord, may I know where dreams are bound,
and let me hear hope's wisdom sound.
I cannot live outside of hope,
without your love I would not cope.

This stanza really spoke to me today. Once again you knew what I needed to read. Thank you for sharing your God given wisdom.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
    Thanks Barbara, for these excellent comments and super review blessings Roy
Comment from Sally Law
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Beautifully penned and illustrated spiritual poem/prayer, Roy! I am forever grateful for the saving grace of God, imparted to me the moment I believe. I rejoice with you today, and the generations with us.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ,
Sal XO

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Sally, for these terrific comments and review blessings Roy
Comment from BethShelby
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This is is a very beautiful and meaningful prayer of praise. It could only be created by someone who knows the Lord and lives with his peeace. It is joy that pssses understanding.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Beth, for these terrific comments and review blessings Roy
Comment from Paul McFarland
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That's a very nice prayer, Roy. I know this is picky picky, but I would put a comma after "in my darkness" in the second stanza. Your love of God really comes through in this poem.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Paul, for these terrific comments and review blessings Roy