Insane
A human condition31 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
That is so true. We get caught up in what we can't do then don't take the time for the things we can do. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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That is so true. We get caught up in what we can't do then don't take the time for the things we can do. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Interesting poem. There is anger and a challenge in the tone.We are living in difficult times when the villains seems to have an upper hand.But soon it will change I am sure.I am a believer in good Karma. Have faith in Him and above all in oneself. Things will work out. Thank you for sharing a food for thought!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Interesting poem. There is anger and a challenge in the tone.We are living in difficult times when the villains seems to have an upper hand.But soon it will change I am sure.I am a believer in good Karma. Have faith in Him and above all in oneself. Things will work out. Thank you for sharing a food for thought!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Jeffrey Mitchell
I like the loop poem, it speaks about our time, and the confusion in the world. I wish you good luck in the contest. And thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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I like the loop poem, it speaks about our time, and the confusion in the world. I wish you good luck in the contest. And thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
love the sound and message of this poem. Neatly captures the essential insanity of the human race. We are indeed quite insane particularly these days if I were writing it I'd make it a bit more political but that is just my opinion
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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love the sound and message of this poem. Neatly captures the essential insanity of the human race. We are indeed quite insane particularly these days if I were writing it I'd make it a bit more political but that is just my opinion
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is too much anger in the world, if only people would think things through before displaying their dissatisfaction, there is a place for all of us to live in peace. But war seems to be the inevitable consequence of being human. A fine write with a good message, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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There is too much anger in the world, if only people would think things through before displaying their dissatisfaction, there is a place for all of us to live in peace. But war seems to be the inevitable consequence of being human. A fine write with a good message, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from nomi338
I think that perhaps the hardest truth to accept is the truth that exposes our shortcomings. Few are willing to admit that there are things that we cannot do. Whether due to weakness or ignorance, there are things that we may never accomplish. The wise course is to not muck tings up by trying to force them to work rather than accepting our inabilities and going on with our lives.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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I think that perhaps the hardest truth to accept is the truth that exposes our shortcomings. Few are willing to admit that there are things that we cannot do. Whether due to weakness or ignorance, there are things that we may never accomplish. The wise course is to not muck tings up by trying to force them to work rather than accepting our inabilities and going on with our lives.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Pinder
I liked this interesting loop poetry that questions the sanity of the human race. You have expressed it with creativity and humor. However in truth, I believe that many people open the door to insanity by rejecting God and going their own selfish way to such an extent that they can become very Separated from a healthy reality.
Bill
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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I liked this interesting loop poetry that questions the sanity of the human race. You have expressed it with creativity and humor. However in truth, I believe that many people open the door to insanity by rejecting God and going their own selfish way to such an extent that they can become very Separated from a healthy reality.
Bill
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words make me smile, they are descriptive and creative.
I like the message in this poem. The author's speak volumes. The
artwork is wild and compliments this poem. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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The author's words make me smile, they are descriptive and creative.
I like the message in this poem. The author's speak volumes. The
artwork is wild and compliments this poem. Have a great day!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Is the human condition so complex? The poem indicates it is so and the art you chose promotes your statements quite well. Oh what a tangled web! Very mixed up people.
Ralf
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Is the human condition so complex? The poem indicates it is so and the art you chose promotes your statements quite well. Oh what a tangled web! Very mixed up people.
Ralf
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from equestrik
What a thought provoking write with so much truth to it. I especially like the lines: You humans are fixated on yourselves.
Yourselves are haunted by what you can't do. Very nice write and good for the contest.
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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What a thought provoking write with so much truth to it. I especially like the lines: You humans are fixated on yourselves.
Yourselves are haunted by what you can't do. Very nice write and good for the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
