Love's Vision
The Japanese Kouta with a challenge41 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello dear Yvette!
Far more worthy of five stars! Lovely presentation, and I am intrigued by the form! Hopefully, I will get chance to attempt it soon! I must admit, it is a new poetic form to me!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Hello dear Yvette!
Far more worthy of five stars! Lovely presentation, and I am intrigued by the form! Hopefully, I will get chance to attempt it soon! I must admit, it is a new poetic form to me!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Hey, stranger -- good to see your smiling face... talk about somebody that's behind!! Ugh! But I'm trying.... although I did find some energy from the prose muse this past week (been a while since those two or three stopped by so I had to oblige them) and that felt good! :) :) Thanx so much for your review on this 'newly discovered' short form, Diane... gotta keep life interesting, ya know?! ;) :) Look forward to your giving it a go when things slow down for you! ;) :) Have a bright, sunshiny week, my friend! ;) Yvette
Comment from lauralumummu
Such a lovely fanciful poem and the picture suit, it. I will try your challenge.
You always present your poem so well. Have a great day Laura.--------------
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Such a lovely fanciful poem and the picture suit, it. I will try your challenge.
You always present your poem so well. Have a great day Laura.--------------
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this 'newly discovered' short form, Laura... gotta keep life interesting, ya know?! ;) :) Look forward to your giving it a go! ;) :) Have a bright, sunshiny week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
How beautiful! The presentation with its art and poem, together is so eloquent. I will bookcase it and take up your challenge. I'm not sure when, but soon. So well done.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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How beautiful! The presentation with its art and poem, together is so eloquent. I will bookcase it and take up your challenge. I'm not sure when, but soon. So well done.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this 'newly discovered' short form, Rafy... gotta keep life interesting, ya know?! ;) :) Look forward to your giving it a go! ;) :) Have a bright, sunshiny week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bill Pinder
Yvette,
you won six stars for your originality and creativity and coming up with a new style and creating an excellent one yourself with a perfect match of picture and wording.
Bill
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Yvette,
you won six stars for your originality and creativity and coming up with a new style and creating an excellent one yourself with a perfect match of picture and wording.
Bill
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Oh, Bill, thanx so much for this awesome review on this 'newly discovered' short form. I ran across it over the holidays and decided to give it a go? you just made it worth the effort!! ;) Would love to see your pen see what it could do with it? !! ;) Thanx again and have a bright, sunshiny week! ;) Yvette
Comment from robyn corum
Yvette,
Look at you, digging up new forms to share. Some of us are really familiar with the haiku, senryu, kyoka, haiga, tanka and haibun, but this is new to me. It's really interesting. The strict form and allowance for rhyme should have folks jumping right on it. *smile*
This one was lots of fun - romance always is. Thanks a bunch!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Yvette,
Look at you, digging up new forms to share. Some of us are really familiar with the haiku, senryu, kyoka, haiga, tanka and haibun, but this is new to me. It's really interesting. The strict form and allowance for rhyme should have folks jumping right on it. *smile*
This one was lots of fun - romance always is. Thanks a bunch!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this 'newly discovered' short form, Robyn... gotta keep life interesting, ya know?! ;) :) Have a bright, sunshiny week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Oh, this is really lovely. The poem and accompanying awesome picture send a powerful message about idealistic young love. The style/form is appealing.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Oh, this is really lovely. The poem and accompanying awesome picture send a powerful message about idealistic young love. The style/form is appealing.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this 'newly discovered' short form, Janice... gotta keep life interesting, ya know?! ;) :) Look forward to your giving it a go! ;) :) Have a bright, sunshiny week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Janet Foor
I am not familiar with the Japanese form of Kouta but I enjoyed reading this one. The delightful picture added to the message with your well chosen words.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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I am not familiar with the Japanese form of Kouta but I enjoyed reading this one. The delightful picture added to the message with your well chosen words.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this 'newly discovered' short form, Janet... gotta keep life interesting, ya know?! ;) :) Have a bright, sunshiny week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Tina Crute
Adorable picture, and the words are just what I can imagine them saying to each other! I may have to try one! This really is an all around beautiful presentation!
Tina
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Adorable picture, and the words are just what I can imagine them saying to each other! I may have to try one! This really is an all around beautiful presentation!
Tina
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this 'newly discovered' short form, Tina... gotta keep life interesting, ya know?! ;) :) Look forward to you're giving it a go! ;) :) Have a bright, sunshiny week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Colin John
Nicely done yvette and wow you have at your disposal some great pictures, which add to your colourful rhymes, thank you so much for sharing .kind regards colin xx
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Nicely done yvette and wow you have at your disposal some great pictures, which add to your colourful rhymes, thank you so much for sharing .kind regards colin xx
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this 'newly discovered' short form, Colin... gotta keep life interesting, ya know?! ;) :) Have a bright, sunshiny week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I just did two this morning but I truly want to try, it does sound like fun. Loved the wording and I think the rhymning makes it more like a poetry piece
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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I just did two this morning but I truly want to try, it does sound like fun. Loved the wording and I think the rhymning makes it more like a poetry piece
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this 'newly discovered' short form, Barb... gotta keep life interesting, ya know?! ;) :) Have a bright, sunshiny week! ;) Yvette
