I'm Free at Last
In your loving arms52 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
And isn't it grand that God has our names written on his palm. Wow - what a thought. We need to turn to Him daily, ask forgiveness, count on his mercy. What a great God. Thanks for this good reminder. I enjoyed your poem.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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And isn't it grand that God has our names written on his palm. Wow - what a thought. We need to turn to Him daily, ask forgiveness, count on his mercy. What a great God. Thanks for this good reminder. I enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Gail for your most understanding review .
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Beautiful confession of the heart! Its genuine, sincere and moving. The words are powerful and true! The third stanza especially speaks of life choices that determine our freedom... or bondage.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Beautiful confession of the heart! Its genuine, sincere and moving. The words are powerful and true! The third stanza especially speaks of life choices that determine our freedom... or bondage.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Donka for your most understanding review .
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Joy Graham
Dear Mystery Poet,
I enjoyed reading your sonnet today. Lovely iambic pentameter. I keep stumbling on the word, "quandaries" but when I go back and pronounce it, "quan'dries" it works fine. I just have to remind myself to do that though. I like your rhymes, they are good and sound to me. Nice to see you have a good turn in the third stanza. Good closing couplet.
I think this is a fine entry and I wish you well in the contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Dear Mystery Poet,
I enjoyed reading your sonnet today. Lovely iambic pentameter. I keep stumbling on the word, "quandaries" but when I go back and pronounce it, "quan'dries" it works fine. I just have to remind myself to do that though. I like your rhymes, they are good and sound to me. Nice to see you have a good turn in the third stanza. Good closing couplet.
I think this is a fine entry and I wish you well in the contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Joy for your most understanding review. "Quandaries" is a funny one that can have 2 or 3 syllable count depending on how you say it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Reese Turner
Very beautiful thought. Letting go of the worries and letting Him sooth your pain. We could all use a bit more of that! Good luck in the sonnet prompt.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Very beautiful thought. Letting go of the worries and letting Him sooth your pain. We could all use a bit more of that! Good luck in the sonnet prompt.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Reese for your most understanding review and good wishes. It came in 2nd place. Yay .
Blessings
Janet
Comment from kiwijenny
What an amazing poem...a sonnet that's right on it..I swan it...is true in the truest best sense...free at last in Jesus' arms...free from sin , from doubt , from death because it is swallowed up in eternal life'well penned
God bless
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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What an amazing poem...a sonnet that's right on it..I swan it...is true in the truest best sense...free at last in Jesus' arms...free from sin , from doubt , from death because it is swallowed up in eternal life'well penned
God bless
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your most understanding review .
Blessings
Janet
Comment from karenina
A sonnet of faith is not something I see everyday. Kudos to you for thinking outside the box of the traditional moon and spoon and June romance theme. Love for God and Love of God is a powerful thing! I don't think I could get through life without it... Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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A sonnet of faith is not something I see everyday. Kudos to you for thinking outside the box of the traditional moon and spoon and June romance theme. Love for God and Love of God is a powerful thing! I don't think I could get through life without it... Karenina
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you karenina for your most understanding review .
Blessings
Janet
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You're most welcome!--Karenina
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is a lovely sonnet and the words are what many of us could be saying. We are not perfect, and God knows that. He has said He will forgive, we just have to ask. Well done, this is a lovely contest entry. Good luck! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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That is a lovely sonnet and the words are what many of us could be saying. We are not perfect, and God knows that. He has said He will forgive, we just have to ask. Well done, this is a lovely contest entry. Good luck! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Sandra for your most understanding review and good luck wishes. It came in 2nd place. Yay.
Blessings
Janet
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Aw, huge congratulations!! :)) xx
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Thank you :))))))
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, unknown writer. It had a good flow to it and the message was perfectly clear. Nice job of writing this and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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This was a good read, unknown writer. It had a good flow to it and the message was perfectly clear. Nice job of writing this and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your most understanding review and good luck wishes. It came in 2nd place. Yay.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Sonnet. We live our lives on earth the best we can and search for peace and freedom, but we cannot find it until we find ourselves in the arms of God.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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A very well-written Sonnet. We live our lives on earth the best we can and search for peace and freedom, but we cannot find it until we find ourselves in the arms of God.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Sandra your most understanding review .
Blessings
Comment from patcelaw
Author, it is a most lovely sonnet, I do so much appreciate the wording and the message and it received my vote in the voting booth.
Patricia
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Author, it is a most lovely sonnet, I do so much appreciate the wording and the message and it received my vote in the voting booth.
Patricia
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2019
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Thank you Patricia for your most understanding review and the extra special sixth star..
Thank you too for your vote. It came in 2nd place. Yay!
Blessings
Janet
