It's There We Fare To Die
Just a poem39 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A set of country scenes, which themselves seem to represent the end of their time and era, and somewhere in the middle is our life, which also will end in decline and death. The alliteration and rhyming were a bit too strong for me in this one, but I am sure it was deliberate and intentionally that way.
Wendy
A set of country scenes, which themselves seem to represent the end of their time and era, and somewhere in the middle is our life, which also will end in decline and death. The alliteration and rhyming were a bit too strong for me in this one, but I am sure it was deliberate and intentionally that way.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2023
Comment from Frank Malley
This poem establishes focus with the strong stresses present in its first line. As the poem continues, it uses images from old-fashioned agriculture to establish a setting within nature for the wayfaring work a human must do en route to his or her ending. In tetrameter, there is one line that leaves this consistent meter, and like the first line, it employs strong stresses that importantly interrupt the music of the poem and thereby ensure that the reader's thoughtful participation will not be lost to the raptures of rhythm.
This poem establishes focus with the strong stresses present in its first line. As the poem continues, it uses images from old-fashioned agriculture to establish a setting within nature for the wayfaring work a human must do en route to his or her ending. In tetrameter, there is one line that leaves this consistent meter, and like the first line, it employs strong stresses that importantly interrupt the music of the poem and thereby ensure that the reader's thoughtful participation will not be lost to the raptures of rhythm.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2023
Comment from Lisasview
Interesting read early in the morning here in Spain........
Ones never ending life's cycle...........
I enjoyed your metaphors.......I find metaphors to be so inter.
Lisasview....
Interesting read early in the morning here in Spain........
Ones never ending life's cycle...........
I enjoyed your metaphors.......I find metaphors to be so inter.
Lisasview....
Comment Written 21-Jul-2023
Comment from forestport12
Just love the way you put things with such splendid alliterations, like, "the never ending wend of wind." I like how those strings of words roll off my tongue and fill my mind with such imagination of life. Like how you use the, "betwixt", which is where we find ourselves whether we want it or not.
Just love the way you put things with such splendid alliterations, like, "the never ending wend of wind." I like how those strings of words roll off my tongue and fill my mind with such imagination of life. Like how you use the, "betwixt", which is where we find ourselves whether we want it or not.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2023
Comment from Douglas Goff
Well, the red barns are certainly a dying breed in farm country.
An era of the metal pole barn variety has arrived and is peppering the landscape. Not nearly as pretty as the old wooden structures of days gone by.
Great ode to them.
D
Well, the red barns are certainly a dying breed in farm country.
An era of the metal pole barn variety has arrived and is peppering the landscape. Not nearly as pretty as the old wooden structures of days gone by.
Great ode to them.
D
Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
Comment from Eleri
This poem conjures up some strange images but I will be honest and say that I don't understand it. I presume that it is about death in some way but the images of the shed and barn do not really resonate with me. The alliteration is great though and I am sure that other people will get it and love it.
Eleri
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This poem conjures up some strange images but I will be honest and say that I don't understand it. I presume that it is about death in some way but the images of the shed and barn do not really resonate with me. The alliteration is great though and I am sure that other people will get it and love it.
Eleri
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
There's something a bit Dylan Thomas about this verse. This is a very bleak and eerie landscape of death conveyed with some quite dramatic imagery and word play. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
There's something a bit Dylan Thomas about this verse. This is a very bleak and eerie landscape of death conveyed with some quite dramatic imagery and word play. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
Comment from Ulla
Again you have written a wonderful poem so full of imagination. I liked it a lot. The imagery is vivid. You always find such lovely words. I liked it a lot. Ulla:)))
Again you have written a wonderful poem so full of imagination. I liked it a lot. The imagery is vivid. You always find such lovely words. I liked it a lot. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a beautiful poem but I'm going to be totally honest, it was above my level of comprehension. If I had to guess it was about our station in life. But I am probably way off. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
This was a beautiful poem but I'm going to be totally honest, it was above my level of comprehension. If I had to guess it was about our station in life. But I am probably way off. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well, I do think it is well written; however you already know that, right, but it is puzzling in the sense I sense a pastoral scene with rolling hills which is hard to find with salt-coated drying nets.
Well, I do think it is well written; however you already know that, right, but it is puzzling in the sense I sense a pastoral scene with rolling hills which is hard to find with salt-coated drying nets.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2023