Grace is What We Need
Can't we all just get along?50 total reviews
Comment from Onely
A Lovely way of getting your message through to the reader. It is flows well and is an easy, enjoyable read. The poem isn't perfect but the message is and that is what we all desire.
Thank yo for sharing and GOD Bless,
Onely
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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A Lovely way of getting your message through to the reader. It is flows well and is an easy, enjoyable read. The poem isn't perfect but the message is and that is what we all desire.
Thank yo for sharing and GOD Bless,
Onely
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much! 8-)
Comment from bob cullen
You sure got that right.
I can't argue with your message. Nor can I find fault with your poem.
There are a lot of spiritual poems on this site but very few of them equal the quality of 'Grace Is What We Need.'
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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You sure got that right.
I can't argue with your message. Nor can I find fault with your poem.
There are a lot of spiritual poems on this site but very few of them equal the quality of 'Grace Is What We Need.'
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much, Bob. I appreciate your kind comments.
Comment from HauntedNemophilist
This was really beautiful and brought across your message very clearly! It is such a simple and lovely way of saying what is really true. Love is the one belief that really matters to everyone
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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This was really beautiful and brought across your message very clearly! It is such a simple and lovely way of saying what is really true. Love is the one belief that really matters to everyone
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much for your review. I would appreciate if you would elaborate on the three star rating so that I can improve my writing. 8-)
Comment from rspoet
Beautiful sentiment in a beautiful poem.
Good rhyme and near rhyme (belief/need)
Very nice alliteration
The rhythm and flow of the poem works well
Beautiful art work a "reflection" on the poem
Nice presented in gold background with red font
"Grace is what we need."
Excellent, in and out
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Beautiful sentiment in a beautiful poem.
Good rhyme and near rhyme (belief/need)
Very nice alliteration
The rhythm and flow of the poem works well
Beautiful art work a "reflection" on the poem
Nice presented in gold background with red font
"Grace is what we need."
Excellent, in and out
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much for your review and kind comments. 8-)
Comment from artemis53
Basically I would refer to this as calling someone out on their own behavior. It is expressed well and I enjoyed that 'ever-moving' piece of artwork that seems to flow continuously.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Basically I would refer to this as calling someone out on their own behavior. It is expressed well and I enjoyed that 'ever-moving' piece of artwork that seems to flow continuously.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thank you so much! 8-)
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Karen. I wish I had saved a six for this beautiful piece mate. It flows beautifully and rhymes well, but the message is wonderful and very important. Why can't we just get along? Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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G'day Karen. I wish I had saved a six for this beautiful piece mate. It flows beautifully and rhymes well, but the message is wonderful and very important. Why can't we just get along? Cheers Fez
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much, Fez. Glad you liked this one. 8-)
Comment from Delahay
Most of us look in the mirror every day but do we truly understand just who or what we are seeing looking back at us? We could all use a good, long look at what is inside us and maybe get an idea of how others see us. Perhaps we will understand that we are not all that different from each other.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Most of us look in the mirror every day but do we truly understand just who or what we are seeing looking back at us? We could all use a good, long look at what is inside us and maybe get an idea of how others see us. Perhaps we will understand that we are not all that different from each other.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your review and kind comments. 8-)
Comment from krys123
Karen;
+ near notable alliteration's: /"Hurting hearts"/"sins are sins"/"we worry what's within"/"stands so straight"/
+ Rhyming words are contingent or demeaning a concept of each line this is important because it is neither forced nor labored and helpful in the rhythmic flow throughout the poem.
+ Rhythmic meter (variable syllabic count), cadence, timing, movement and tempo all will helpful in making the reading clear, fluid and very easy.
+ Enjambment used which is the running out of a thought, concept and idea from one stanza, couplet and line to the next without a syntactical break.
+ For the assessment and summary: a very strong and powerful message that the writer sends to the reader into all who reads the poem. Metaphorical in a way as it keeps with a very strong spiritual aspects and is very inspirational and enlightening. I truly enjoyed and was very impressed with this poem.
+ Thank you for sharing and posting this Karen made a good Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Karen;
+ near notable alliteration's: /"Hurting hearts"/"sins are sins"/"we worry what's within"/"stands so straight"/
+ Rhyming words are contingent or demeaning a concept of each line this is important because it is neither forced nor labored and helpful in the rhythmic flow throughout the poem.
+ Rhythmic meter (variable syllabic count), cadence, timing, movement and tempo all will helpful in making the reading clear, fluid and very easy.
+ Enjambment used which is the running out of a thought, concept and idea from one stanza, couplet and line to the next without a syntactical break.
+ For the assessment and summary: a very strong and powerful message that the writer sends to the reader into all who reads the poem. Metaphorical in a way as it keeps with a very strong spiritual aspects and is very inspirational and enlightening. I truly enjoyed and was very impressed with this poem.
+ Thank you for sharing and posting this Karen made a good Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much, Alex, for your insightful and extensive review. 8-)
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You are so sincerely welcome Karen.
Alex
Comment from waterartist707
There is a beautiful element to this piece. It's captivating and the expressions are incredible. It is very moving. Excellent flow and well written, I greatly enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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There is a beautiful element to this piece. It's captivating and the expressions are incredible. It is very moving. Excellent flow and well written, I greatly enjoyed it.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much. I am happy that you liked it. 8-)
Comment from jmdg1954
Powerful poetry for s topic that could certainly use some advertising. Your words are artistically put together and delivering the true meaning.
Nicely done... John
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Powerful poetry for s topic that could certainly use some advertising. Your words are artistically put together and delivering the true meaning.
Nicely done... John
Comment Written 24-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Thanks, John. I appreciate your review and kind comments.
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Thanks, John. I appreciate your review and kind comments.
