If Love Should Saunter Up My Walk
rhyming quatrains129 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
I admire your smooth flow of words that adds to the ease of the rhyming quatrains,a challenging form of poetry for me. Excellent rhyming of words,passing,asking,tomorrow and sorrow all give the poem a feel of emotions. This is an excellent poem for a devotional book.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
I admire your smooth flow of words that adds to the ease of the rhyming quatrains,a challenging form of poetry for me. Excellent rhyming of words,passing,asking,tomorrow and sorrow all give the poem a feel of emotions. This is an excellent poem for a devotional book.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Elaine, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from TAB_that's me
We all have sorrow sometimes but we do need to look towards love and regain our happiness. Great advice in your lovely poem.
Teresa
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
We all have sorrow sometimes but we do need to look towards love and regain our happiness. Great advice in your lovely poem.
Teresa
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Teresa, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Malerie
Very nice, I enjoyed reading this piece. I especially like the last stanza:
"and sorrow's such a needless way
to waste away life's passing --
especially when love will thrive
for those who do the asking"
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
Very nice, I enjoyed reading this piece. I especially like the last stanza:
"and sorrow's such a needless way
to waste away life's passing --
especially when love will thrive
for those who do the asking"
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Malerie :-) Broke
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Brooke - this is lovely to read and even lovelier to ponder over. Loved your images, the waiting and the expectation of what is next such treats of friendship and love. As always excellent work. - Great photo too.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
Dear Brooke - this is lovely to read and even lovelier to ponder over. Loved your images, the waiting and the expectation of what is next such treats of friendship and love. As always excellent work. - Great photo too.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Maureen, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Cragler
A very heartfelt piece here. Your imagery is excellent and as always so is the flow and rhyme of the poem. Your choice of picture is very apt well done.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
A very heartfelt piece here. Your imagery is excellent and as always so is the flow and rhyme of the poem. Your choice of picture is very apt well done.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Craig, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
Hello there~!
This is a really lovely poem. The picture compliments the beautiful message presented.
Well Done!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
Hello there~!
This is a really lovely poem. The picture compliments the beautiful message presented.
Well Done!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Kausar, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Emily George
Such a beautiful poem of love and friendships.
Great picture, so beautiful.
I found the poem flowed easily from line to line connecting easily with your B, D end rhyming.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
Such a beautiful poem of love and friendships.
Great picture, so beautiful.
I found the poem flowed easily from line to line connecting easily with your B, D end rhyming.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Emily, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from MisinformedPoet
This is a very sweet rhyming poem with a good message to anyone seeking to be loved. I think the last two lines:
'especially when love will thrive
for those who do the asking.'
Are a really good mantra and a lesson to all.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
This is a very sweet rhyming poem with a good message to anyone seeking to be loved. I think the last two lines:
'especially when love will thrive
for those who do the asking.'
Are a really good mantra and a lesson to all.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Misinformed, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Gargantuan2
This one is wonderful. I think I would still love to buy a book of your poetry, this is an example of something I would look forward to. Chloe looks cute too!!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
This one is wonderful. I think I would still love to buy a book of your poetry, this is an example of something I would look forward to. Chloe looks cute too!!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Gargantuan, thanks so much for your generous response to this poem - Chloe is a total sweetheart :-) Brooke
Comment from Just Pete
A wonderful [oem with such a powerful meaning.
"for in love's possibility
lies hope for each tomorrow,
where heedless inattentio n
can only lead to sorrow,..."
Particularly liked this stanza, it speaks the truth. Congratulations on the awards. Pete
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
A wonderful [oem with such a powerful meaning.
"for in love's possibility
lies hope for each tomorrow,
where heedless inattentio n
can only lead to sorrow,..."
Particularly liked this stanza, it speaks the truth. Congratulations on the awards. Pete
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Pete, thank you so very much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke