As I Sit Here And Write To You
Words can say many things if said from the heart32 total reviews
Comment from GaryCecil
This was really good! I enjoyed it from start to finish.
Were married on that autumn day
Trees with leaves of red and brown
The luster from their colors
Enhanced your beauty in your gown
I enjoyed this part the most ^^
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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This was really good! I enjoyed it from start to finish.
Were married on that autumn day
Trees with leaves of red and brown
The luster from their colors
Enhanced your beauty in your gown
I enjoyed this part the most ^^
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on this I must say so myself I liked that stanza the best myself conjurers
up some great memories
TK
Comment from kiwijenny
This is just beautiful....I hope not biographical
I liked your poem a lot....the lonely keyboard.......lonely words...
Grand kids on the knee but she is missing........sad
God bless
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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This is just beautiful....I hope not biographical
I liked your poem a lot....the lonely keyboard.......lonely words...
Grand kids on the knee but she is missing........sad
God bless
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you much kiwijenny It's part reality part from the portals of my mind which sometimes seem more real than reality its itself
TK
Comment from gaangel62
Why did you have to make me cry this morning??? I love this poem....love is just pouring from this poem. Memories are al we have left at times.....have a great day,Tarnished Knight......Big Hugs....Angie(Georgia Peach).....
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Why did you have to make me cry this morning??? I love this poem....love is just pouring from this poem. Memories are al we have left at times.....have a great day,Tarnished Knight......Big Hugs....Angie(Georgia Peach).....
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Awe thank you my Georgia Peach for the 6 stars I am humbled for sure. Did not mean to make you cry honest but yet am glad in a way that it touched your emotions
TK
Comment from Tina McKala
This was immensely poignant. Full of feelings, love and sorrow, showing that the real love will never stop. Wonderful smooth flow, rhythm and rhymes, now a single one was forced. Perfect poem with everything that a poem needs. And if it is a biological piece, than I am terribly sorry for your loss.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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This was immensely poignant. Full of feelings, love and sorrow, showing that the real love will never stop. Wonderful smooth flow, rhythm and rhymes, now a single one was forced. Perfect poem with everything that a poem needs. And if it is a biological piece, than I am terribly sorry for your loss.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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WOW !! Thank you so much for the 6 stars Tina and your kind words!!It's a mixture of reality with a bit of my imagination thrown it as well
Again thank you so very much
tk
Comment from Cookie333
Funny how wistful memories might create such a lovely piece. I am still waiting for the grandchild, I can't stand the wait! This one flowed well and had good rhythm for this reader
Thank you for sharing
K
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Funny how wistful memories might create such a lovely piece. I am still waiting for the grandchild, I can't stand the wait! This one flowed well and had good rhythm for this reader
Thank you for sharing
K
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you so very much Cookie I have two grand kids and one great grand child so now you know I'm just an old silly poet with a bit of the blues mixed in lol
TK
Comment from CR Delport
It is actually scary how quickly time passes and how much regrets we have from our past. This is a lovely poem that is very well written.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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It is actually scary how quickly time passes and how much regrets we have from our past. This is a lovely poem that is very well written.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much CR Yes time is does have a away of escaping to where I don't know until one day you sit down and see your grand kids playing and OMG your great grands kids playing where once your grand kids did
tk
Comment from Treischel
Fond memories of a loving wife who died long ago is beautifully scripted in this tender poem, done erstwhile abcb rhyming. A bittersweet review. Thanks for sharing your intimate thoughts.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Fond memories of a loving wife who died long ago is beautifully scripted in this tender poem, done erstwhile abcb rhyming. A bittersweet review. Thanks for sharing your intimate thoughts.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much Mr T!!!
Comment from Liz Dunbee
I just loved reading this. Your rhyming is excellent and the poem flows well. Your choice of words and imagery is very good. 'Trees with leaves of red and brown, the lustre from their colors, enhanced your beauty in your gown.'is exceptional. Well done on great work and the good choice of music.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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I just loved reading this. Your rhyming is excellent and the poem flows well. Your choice of words and imagery is very good. 'Trees with leaves of red and brown, the lustre from their colors, enhanced your beauty in your gown.'is exceptional. Well done on great work and the good choice of music.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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awe thank you so very much Liz
Hugs from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
TK
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha ATK,
Your poem is very well written as always. Wish I had a "6" to give. Beautiful memories and a tear jerker to boot. You sure have a way with words.
Aloha, Gingerella
Hawaiian Mermaid
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Aloha ATK,
Your poem is very well written as always. Wish I had a "6" to give. Beautiful memories and a tear jerker to boot. You sure have a way with words.
Aloha, Gingerella
Hawaiian Mermaid
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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awe you do still like me xxoo
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh wow what a piece from the heart.
And Roy with that wonderful song only adds to the emotion.
A loss os spouse is a hars thing
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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Oh wow what a piece from the heart.
And Roy with that wonderful song only adds to the emotion.
A loss os spouse is a hars thing
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2013
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I am into heart ful words tonight Barb Always write better when a little down boo hoo
tk
