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Comment from Jane Johnson
I guess I don't understand the concept, even after reading your explanation of a word weave. It still makes no sense to me. Anyway it is hard for me to judge, but I see everyone else understands it, or seemingly so, as you are getting go ratings on it. And I'm confused about the significance of the yellow door. Please help me out here and enlighten me. I did like the artwork you chose to use with this. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-May-2013
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I guess I don't understand the concept, even after reading your explanation of a word weave. It still makes no sense to me. Anyway it is hard for me to judge, but I see everyone else understands it, or seemingly so, as you are getting go ratings on it. And I'm confused about the significance of the yellow door. Please help me out here and enlighten me. I did like the artwork you chose to use with this. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-May-2013
reply by the author on 15-May-2013
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Thank you Jane. New windows are the future. Yellowed doors are the past. Pore means to take it in, absorb it into your skin. Hope that helps.
Comment from amahra
Hey that was great. You should start a contest with it. I really liked the idea. I loved the pumpkin yellow poem as well as the writing.
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Hey that was great. You should start a contest with it. I really liked the idea. I loved the pumpkin yellow poem as well as the writing.
Comment Written 15-May-2013
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Thanks amahra. I'll consider that.
Comment from mystery poet
You have a flair for creating writing forms and this
shows off your talent quite well. I'd like to see you
create a contest just for fun. Bet you'd be surprised
at how this would take off...Although you keep it short,
the point you make is strong and meaning compelling.
I guess one should be careful of the door one chooses
to walk through, aye!
reply by the author on 15-May-2013
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You have a flair for creating writing forms and this
shows off your talent quite well. I'd like to see you
create a contest just for fun. Bet you'd be surprised
at how this would take off...Although you keep it short,
the point you make is strong and meaning compelling.
I guess one should be careful of the door one chooses
to walk through, aye!
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 15-May-2013
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review. I will consider doing that. I really appreciate the sixes.
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This poem was interesting.
Stirred my imagination to wonder about the
yellow door. Why yellow, by the way?
I am still puzzled. Riddle me this, 'riddle
me that'...kind of puzzle. Hugs!
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Just aged, ancient, weathers. New windows the future. Yellowed door, the past. Pore, deeply absorbed, into the skin.
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I had it all except the yellowed door...
How I missed it, don't know. Makes perfect
sense. Had a long day so I'll fall back on
that. It's great to hear from you, dear friend!
Have a restful night.
Comment from Carole Rosa
I read about Treischel and found you to be an interesting person and then after reading your poem, in my opinion, you have a neat personality. I like your attitude. And your author notes are great too Carole.
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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I read about Treischel and found you to be an interesting person and then after reading your poem, in my opinion, you have a neat personality. I like your attitude. And your author notes are great too Carole.
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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Thank you so much Carole. I appreciate your visit and very nice review, the stars are incredible?
Comment from simplyteresa
This is such a wonderful poem and I appreciate the introduction you have given me into a new format, I will have to be adventures and try it one day. I enjoy the image you paint with regard to windows and doors.
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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This is such a wonderful poem and I appreciate the introduction you have given me into a new format, I will have to be adventures and try it one day. I enjoy the image you paint with regard to windows and doors.
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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Thank you simpleteresa.
Comment from gramalot8
Treischel, I really liked this. And the style of weave... such a great one. Don't know if it's original or not, but great just the same. Loved the image of the yellow door as the past and the windows opening up the future. Great job and thanks for sharing with us.
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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Treischel, I really liked this. And the style of weave... such a great one. Don't know if it's original or not, but great just the same. Loved the image of the yellow door as the past and the windows opening up the future. Great job and thanks for sharing with us.
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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Thank you so much gramalot
Comment from ravenblack
let me see if I have this right - the windows are new beginnings, the yellowed doors old doors or the past ( or the doors of a heavy smoker - not!). I don't quite understand pore other than possibly our skin's portal which I guess should transact with both present and past. and of course, a flip-side tip of the hat to Poe. Interesting form.
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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let me see if I have this right - the windows are new beginnings, the yellowed doors old doors or the past ( or the doors of a heavy smoker - not!). I don't quite understand pore other than possibly our skin's portal which I guess should transact with both present and past. and of course, a flip-side tip of the hat to Poe. Interesting form.
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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Thanks Ravenbkack. Yes, you nailed it. As I knew you would. Pore = absorb into your being, get under your skin. New windows, future. Yellowed doors, ancient truths.
Comment from God's Writer
A fantastic little poem my friend. So delightful, deep and extremely thought provoking. This poem is woven as if by a master weaver. Thank you
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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A fantastic little poem my friend. So delightful, deep and extremely thought provoking. This poem is woven as if by a master weaver. Thank you
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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Thank you Happy Poet. Got bait mystical in this one.
Comment from poetbear
Poe influenced in last two lines.
Very clever and original.
Well written and creative.
Make sense with great image,imagery, and metaphor.
I like this one!
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Poe influenced in last two lines.
Very clever and original.
Well written and creative.
Make sense with great image,imagery, and metaphor.
I like this one!
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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Thank you poetbear. Yes, I love Edgar Allen. Thank you for so many stars.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
This an excellent poem with excellent meter and rhyme. It follows a good rhyme scheme, It uses figurative language to
Set its mood. Not quite sure why I should use a door if new beginnings are through windows. Reiteration is effective.
Preston
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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This an excellent poem with excellent meter and rhyme. It follows a good rhyme scheme, It uses figurative language to
Set its mood. Not quite sure why I should use a door if new beginnings are through windows. Reiteration is effective.
Preston
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 14-May-2013
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Thanks Preston. New windows are the future, yellowed doors are the past. Embrace them both and live life to the fullest, is what I was trying to get across.
